The Journey (PG)
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"The Journey"
By Funsine Bear

(Prelude)
Mirror, there is a baby girl in this man... that much I am
My thoughts surround hers, a rose in bloom I fear to grasp
The end of innocence has passed and she is all I have
Abounding over me, like a rainbow gleaming these frozen sands
Softly flowing, through my soul now sowing, it's colors stream.

( I )
Clothed in an elegant satin dress, I hear the trees and feel the breath
Of evening's mountain wind caress my painted cheeks
As a million doves fly over head, near the boiling rise of the ocean's crest
I sought rest near a cliff side against jaded pillars of stone
Lost to the depths of a twilight dream, half awake and half asleep
Angels came and brought me to a place my soul had never roamed
Asailing the glass castle's high estate, I saw beings of light robed in silk and shade
The castle shone like a candy treat and I pressed on accompanied
By two angels adorned in the brightest pink, my eyes were ever shown.

One was male of perfect descent, he bore great muscles and held a silver lance
Ink symbols of an ancient language were tattooed from his waist to his neck
The other now held my hand, a mysterious woman who wore diamond bands
Her true figure hidden from my view by a komoto and face cowl tightly strewn
We made our way towards an ominous room, a semblance great of Aztec ruins
Glass statues of women encircled me with smells of lavander and cinnamon root
From above the ceiling's sole opening, fairy dust magically streamed into bloom
Then I opened up my teary eyes, a moment of surprise silenced my cries late
In dresses of flowing ivory and lace, bearing golden crown and smiles great
Two heavenly ladies raised their hands and waves of water washed over me.

"See the baby girl in this man... mirrored by the pool in which he stands?"
"Shall we bring him to the Fountain, that he may drink of its gift?"
I overheard their whispering... "I would be honored to bow before such a spring"
Spoke I humbly without questioning the sensations pulsating in my being
"But if he be too eager, he may reverse the beauty stream with fear"
"Perhaps, but for what other reason could he have been brought here?"
"That my dear Pixie, you and I already know... he has found himself, make it so."

( II )
Looming rays of sunlight soon engulfed my view...
In a flash the celling disappeared as the walls began to fade
I heard birds singing in melodies so clear, then someone called my name

Beautifully they stood together and at last my soul knew...
Lavander and Cheerful Pixie motioned me to draw near with a wave
A marble fountain, carved to resemble an enormous rose, awaited me here
Upon a familiar cliff, whence it seemed a plentiful tree beckoned unto the sky
I cupped my tired hands in the cool stream and drank its soothing wine
The three of us, then drank together and sung of old days gone by
Gracefully swaying we shared a warming farewell hug...
Then instantly I became the little girl I knew I was.

Stirred awake by shivering winds, midnight came alone
Upon it's velvet slide with blackened throne
I conceded my sanctuary and proceeded home
Confident in my beauty, assured by others empathy
It is enough just to be happy with one's growth.
*The End*
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prissyprincess
  OOOO hhh !!! Funshine It,s so heart felt and to think you nearly left us all behind . THX so much for your Warmth and Tenderness .  
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SissyAyanami
That was more like a poem then a real story, but it was still rather nice ^_^
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Miki Yamuri
This is most beautiful and heart felt.
Well done Teddy Bear ... Hope there's more.
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Andreea
If I had any thing to drink, now would be the time to raise a glass to absent friends ... Oh well. ***Raises teacup, and blows kisses to them, wherever they may be***

One of your most beautiful works, reminiscent of Romantic poetry (thinking of Shelley in particular) or H P Lovecraft in his more lyrical and less morbid moods. Dreamlike, timeless, epic, inspiring ... and a wonderful tribute to two dearly-loved and much-missed friends.

         
"When you adopt the standards and the values of someone else or a community or a pressure group, you surrender your own integrity. You become, to the extent of your surrender, less of a human being." (Eleanor Roosevelt)
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LilJennie
I was reminded of the lyrics of classic Yes songs as this began, but then I stopped comparing and let myself be swept along by the flow. Thank you for opening your heart and letting us see this beautiful vision ... you are a wonderful person for sharing something so precious and touching.
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I wish I could write poetry as well as you!
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Sweet Heart
This is most wonderful. It's easy to see your heart ... the light of purity shows amid the darkness of this world.
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