Na'Ru. (PG 13) (Story Complete with Epliogue added)

PG 13 Na'Ru. (PG 13) (Story Complete with Epliogue added)

baby5522

Two World, Two People, One Destiny. Two boys share the same life, both become one in an epic tale of good and evil

Posted on July 24th, 2012 ~ 9:46 am

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NA'RU

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Prologue

The Dynian Dynasty 2595 ADS:

The stars seemed to be as though they were being stretched somehow leaving behind light trails, even the very essence of space itself, looked as though it was being stretched too, into infinity, as there seemed to be no end at at which ever was the point and cause for pulling all of the stars and space itself towards... who knows what.

All that there was, were the stars and space itself, time too was being stretched, it was impossible to see the end point of what ever it was drawing everything in, seeming to defy everything. The laws of the very universe were being broken and there seemed like nothing could be done to stop what ever it was that was causing the stars, all of time and space to stretch in one long band like streak across the cosmos.

As it moved and stretched, everything else that came into direct contact with it began to be stretched too. Even planets in the nearby planetary star system of Dynia were all being drawn in and stretched like they were nothing more than just pieces of elastic instead of being planets. One moment the Dynian star system was there, the next micro second, it was utterly and completely GONE!!!!!!!

Jade

The Jade Empire 2595 ADS:

Planet Jade was a green planet. Although it had oceans, it was vastly for the most part a tropical paradise with gardens and forest trees that stretched endlessly across the vast land mass that made up most of the entire continent of Planet Jade. There was many clearing, lots of lakes, travelling by ship from one part of the land mass of Jade to another, was very quick with not a whole lot of ocean to sail across.

Most of the Jade people travelled on B.I.K.E.S. Biological, Integrated, Kinetic Energy Speeders. They nearly almost resembled what would be called a bike or motor bike on Earth. The frame work was nearly the same, only there was no wheels. They were sleek and very, very fast. For those who preferred not to weave in and out in-between the trees dodging obstacles on the way flew over the green visage scene-scape, in Sun Gliders.

Powered by the sun, the entire structure of the Sun Gliders, that are like small space craft, but that of which do not fly in outer space is made up out of a material that somehow absorbs the sun light that somehow gets turned into energy for all of the gliders key systems. The Jade people had a great king and under him he held and ruled an entire magnificent Empire.

Every man wanted to be in the Empire Galactic Space Core. It was the most greatest honour any man could ever have, though not all men could be or were fighters for the E.G.S. Core. They were either farmers, builders, shipmen, steel workers, craftsmen. Women did work that was more best suited for the fairer sex. The Jade people were nearly almost Elven like, apart from the fact that their skin was a natural suntan brown. Both the males and females had long black hair, but only the males had their hair in tight pony tales, to distinguish the differences between the sexes.

The males wore lots of different shades of green, browns blacks, orange and brownish red. But not the full complete colour red, bright colours like that, especially pink among other very bright and light colours, were what only the females ever wore. The Jade people were travellers of space, but they made enemies on the way, not by choice, they had technologies like no other and it was that other beings from other planets did not like and made them attack the people of Jade.

It was their technological capabilities as well as their incredible warrior like ways, that made the people of Jade such good fighters both in outer space as well as on the surface of any planet. The Jade people were no match for anyone. King Leon the 13^th was the greatest king of all, like his father before him and his father's fathers etc. All who came before, carried the name of the very first King Leon.

King Leon had a son and he was called Leon too. But he also had a second name his mother insisted that he should have. Not wanting to upset his good wife, Queen Gaia. King Leon allowed the second name, which was Na'Ru, which meant son of the Green God. And there was deity known to the Jade People who's name was Jade, from which he had named the planet after himself, he also had a son who was called Na'Ru. In which the Jade people's myths and legends tell a tale where Na'Ru was destroyed by an evil Goddess called Flamessa, The Goddess of Fire.

Leon Na'Ru the 1^st was however, no son of a God. He was a mortal Jade being just like the rest of the people of Jade were. Na'Ru preferred his second name, than that of his first name, he had once told his mother, she was happy, she did not want another male to be called Leon, having one Leon in her life was more than enough. Magi was a great and powerful wizard in all of Jade. He was King Leon's personal advisor. Magi had both great wisdom and magic.

He paid a visit one day to Gaia. “Magi... what an unexpected pleasure to have you come to my chambers... Prey tell, what brings you here?”
"I am here to give you the very same good news I have just given to your good husband and his majesty King Leon the thirteenth...”
Queen Gaia looked to be very excited. “Please do prey tell me, what is this good news that you bring to me?” Magi smiled broadly at his queen.

"You have a truly very blessed son. He bares a very special mark, one given to him by the Gods. Your son Leon Na'Ru will become a very strong and powerful man. He will have almost God like strength, with that comes God like powers too. A gift from one of the Gods.” Gaia seem to tremble, she seemed to be half overjoyed and half fearful at the same time. “May I ask, do you know which God has bestowed this great gift upon my son?”

"Oh yes your majesty... It was of course the great green God himself. Jade...” If it had not been for the fact that he once had a son and more to the point because of the myths and legends. Of one which says that if what so ever the son of Jade were to come back to life in some way, if not as a God, but a mortal, marked by Jade and also baring his son's name. Then that boy would be destroyed by Flamessa. Gaia was a great believer in the Gods and the myths and the legends of her people. Now her joy had turned to solid fear.

But this she could not show to Magi, for fear that he may warn her husband about it. “That is wonderful news, what an honour...” Remarked Gaia, with enthusiasm, to which Magi simply smiled and replied. “It is very wonderful news and a great honour indeed. I can tell that you are very proud of your son. He will one day make the mightiest and greatest King that ever lived. Have no fear for his life your majesty. If or should Flamessa try to kill your son. I will stop her and destroy her...”

"Oh really!!!! You Destroy me!!!!!!!!” Came a sudden voice. Gaia screamed as she saw a body in the shape of a woman suddenly appear before her, it was however, one of flames. It was unsettling to see such an apparition like that. A body, or what looked like one, made completely out of flames, walking, and talking as though it were alive somehow. It was Flamessa, her hair was of fire too which draped and flowed over her curvaceous, stunningly beautiful body.

She wore no clothes, but she was not naked, but if she were, every man would drool like idiots, just looking at her. That is if she were of flesh and blood. Her body however was somehow a solidified form mass of flames flickering, giving off a heat intensity that would burn any man should he ever so much dare to get close to her. Her eyes burned brightly too. She approached close now to Magi.

"Your presence does not effect me Flamessa.” Remarked Magi who stood perfectly still and completely unafraid. “I can not simply be killed by your touch or by that of fire...”
"I already know that Magi...” Remarked Flamessa, who sounded unimpressed with Magi. “I am a Goddess, I know everything... which mean I know and also do have the power to destroy you.”
"We shall see.” Replied Magi still unafraid. But as Flamessa approached him, he vanished.

"I do so love hide and seek, though you can not hide from me forever... I shall find you soon enough Magi and mark my words, I shall truly destroy you...” Just then, Flamessa turned to face queen Gaia. “Oh I have not completely forgotten about you queen Gaia. Once I have found and destroyed. I shall come back for you. But I shan't kill you right away, I will make you watch while I kill your husband, and your son, then I will kill you too.” Flamessa let out a burst of evil laughter before vanishing her self.

Queen Gaia desperately ran off, in the hope she would get to her son before Flamessa got to him. She would have to find a way to protect her son, but she did not know how. She knew that Flamessa would be able to track him down anywhere. Maybe Magi could put some kind of a spell on her son, that would make it impossible for Flamessa to find him. With that in mind, she instead ran off to find Magi first.

Na'Ru was fighting off a sudden and surprise attack of flame demons, they were Flmessa's attack force. He was super strong all right and super fast too. He was happy with a sword in his hand, queen Gaia saw her son, saw how happy he was. She did not want to take that away from him, but he had to stop like fighting and being strong for his own sake, or he will be dead. He was too young to die. He was 18 yarns old and not even yet reach true maturity which was at the age of 20 yarns old. He was still a boy and not yet a man.

Yet he was fighting like a man, he was battle proud just like any other man. What could or would possibly make him change his ways? Gaia was all out of options, if anyone would know, it would be Magi. In her rush to try and find him, queen Gaia had ran into a little girl who yelped as she had knocked her to the ground... “Oh I am so very sorry little one... Are you all right sweetie?” Said Queen Gaia in concern as she helped the little girl up from off the ground.

"Oh your majesty, I am so, so very sorry, I was not looking where I was going...” Replied the little girl with tears in here eyes... “Oh no, no little one, it was I who had not been looking where I was going. I need you though to be very brave for me sweetie. I need you to make your way to the secret escape passage immediately. I will make sure to have a knight to come looking for you right away, he will meet up with you and escort you to the escape passage, okay? Do you think you can do that for me sweetie?”

"Yes your Majesty and thank you.” Replied the sweet little girl who had been wearing a very pretty pink dress with frills that went all the way around the skirt of the dress. She unexpectedly gave queen Gaia a great big hug, she accepted the sweet embrace. “Awe, what a sweet little girl you are and that is such a very pretty dress you have on there, be sure not to get it dirty now.”
"I shan't your Majesty, I promise and again, thank you.”

Queen Gaia soon broke the embrace. “You are so very welcome, now run as fast as those little legs can carry you.”
"Yes Majesty.” Shouted the little girl in reply, as she ran off, as fast as she could possibly run. Queen Gaia smiled, then looked a little confused. “That's odd, I do not recall ever seeing that cute little girl before and I just about know every boy and girl here in the entire Empire.” She shook her head, thinking she must be getting old in her age.

But as she went on her way, a horrible and terrible thought came into her head... “Wait a moment... that was no innocent little girl... That crafty wicked witch of a Goddess... That was Flamessa in disguise.” Quickly, Queen Gaia took up the folds of her dress, and began to run back in the opposite direction, hoping against all hope that she wont be too late. Na'Ru was still fighting off the advancing onslaught of fire demons, attacking him form every direction.

Yet somehow he was killing them off, throwing them off of him even, like they were nothing more than rag dolls. He was somewhat letting how strong he seemed to be, go slightly to his head, he nearly almost got careless, one of the demons was able to just slightly cut him, the cut was not too bad, but it could have been so much more worse, it was then that Na'Ru realised he was not exactly invincible, he took a little more care, he had strength enough and speed.

But that did not make him completely a super Jade being. He did not know how he was so strong and so fast. He was glad though that he was and would not make the same mistake of being big headed, twice. Na'Ru had managed to get some of the fire demons to run after him staying in one spot all the time was proving to be too much of a problem. Not for him but the onslaught of demons would never stop, it almost seemed like a way to distract him and Na'Ru had a feeling that was the exact purpose of the onslaught.

He had ran down a long corridor, and there was alcove in one of the side walls, where he could hide and pick off one flame demon at a time as they passed by, not even noticing he was hidden in a small little incline that him very well. Na'Ru had no muscles at all, so it was understandably how he let his super strength get to his head. Na'Ru was as thin as a rake, as the saying goes. He was a bit of a disappointment to his father in that regard.

Of course once King Leon the thirteenth had been told of the prophecy, as told to him by Magi, then King Leon changed his mind completely about his son's inadequate physique. King Leon was sure as his son's powers grew, magically, somehow he would some how become taller and have the true physique to that of a half God. Na'Ru was certain that he had dispatched all of the flame demons, until he heard the scurrying of feet coming down the corridor. Not knowing what it was, he waited, with his sword held firmly in his grasp. But as he saw a rush of pink rush past him, he stepped out of his hiding place and scooped up the little pink thing in his mighty grasp.

Then he heard a loud shrill... Na'Ru took a good look at what he had been holding... “Why, you're just a little girl... I am so, so very sorry sweetie.” Gently, Na'Ru placed the little girl on the ground and let go of her. “Prince Leon Na'Ru.... I think I have gotten my self lost. Your Mummy told me to find the secret escape passage.” Na'Ru cringed as he heard the name of Leon... “It is okay little one. And please do call me Na'Ru. Or Prince Na'Ru if you prefer.”
“Is this the way to the secret escape passage, Prince Na'Ru?”
Asked the little in a fit of tears. “Oh please don't cry, no, you really are lost. I Tell you what I will take you there my self.”

Suddenly he scooped her up again in his strong arms and carried her all the way to the secret escape passage. There was a night guarding it. “Thank the Gods you have arrived Prince Leon Na'Ru.” Replied the knight the moment he saw and recognised Na'Ru. He knew he really could not ask the knight of the Royal Empire to not call him Leon. Na'Ru suddenly passed the little girl over to the knight, he was surprised, but he took hold of the little girl. “Please take her and guard her well. Lead her and the others to safety...”

The knight did not like the sound of that. “But your royal highness. What about you? If what they are saying to be true, let me protect you.” Na'Ru was not about to let anyone did for him. “NO!!!!” He replied a little harshly, but then he calmly then said to the knight. “I can fully take care of my self. I shall face this Fire Goddess. I wont run, fight her I must, should I die fighting, at last I will die as a man and as a hero...” The knight bowed nodding his head.

"Of that I shan't deprive you of, your royal highness, no one would deserve that more, than you.”
"Thank you, now take this little girl with you and go.”
"Yes your royal highness.” Replied the knight, he took the girl and was gone. He went on, suddenly the little girl vanished from his arms, but strangely the knight carried on as though nothing was wrong.

The little girl soon appeared in a hall of some kind. She was about to do something when a sudden voice called to her. “Oh that is awfully very clever of you Magi, I was almost fooled. But there is an aura about you that never changes, no matter how well you may well change your appearance.. Though I must admit, the frilly pink dress suits you.” The little girl stood and faced Flamessa, but she did not scream, she shimmered, her body changed, but not fully.
Instead of a tall and wise old looking man with a beard in the robes of a wizard.

Stood instead was a very small old man, with no beard, wielding a pink wand, not a mighty golden staff and he looked down at himself, to his shock and horror, he was still wearing the pretty frilly pink dress. “You shan't get away with this Flamessa.” She gave Magi a cruel smile. “Oh but I already have.” She fired something at him and Magi was destroyed, as impossible that was.... He was gone.

Meanwhile.... Queen Gaia was frantically trying to find her son... She somehow bumped into him on her way as he too had bumped into her... “Mother....” Na'Ru looked a little shocked and surprised. “What are you doing here?”
“I met a sweet little girl, but afterword I realised she had to be Flamessa in disguise...”
"What?” Gasped Na'Ru realising the horror... “Did this little girl have on a pretty pink frilly dress?”

"Yes why?”
"I have just dropped her off with a knight of the Empire at the secret passage.”
"No, that wasn't me you fool... Though it does not matter who she was. I have you now Na'Ru and now you are going to die....” Remarked a woman's voice. Suddenly Flamessa appeared before Queen Gaia and Prince Na'Ru. But just then there came another sudden voice, which unexpectedly said. “I do not think so...”

To which Queen Gaia, Prince Na'Ru and Flamessa turned too see who had suddenly spoken. “No... it is not possible.. I destroyed you...” Shrieked Flamessa in shock and disbelief. “As if you could ever really destroy me Flamessa...” Remarked a very grinning Magi who was no in his proper form. “I do not care what it takes to destroy you Magi, but destroy you I shall...”
"You will have to find me first..” Replied Magi with a chuckle and vanished, but so did Flamessa. Just then a sudden voice called out. “Quickly, get out of here while I distract her... For your own safety Na'Ru, do as your mother tells you to do.” Remarked the voice of Magi, Queen Gaia had by now a very good idea, of just how to get her son safely away from Flamessa, but Na'Ru was not going to like what she now had in mind....

TO BE CONTINUED....

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Baby Butch

Posted July 25th, 2012 ~ 3:58 am

You have another interesting story with a lot of far out characters. I like the way it starts and the discriptions of the characters. This does remind me of a science fiction story.

I have a feeling the little girl character ends up important and maby a way of hiding Prince Na'Ru from the wicked flamessa and her fire deamons.

More story please!

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baby5522

Posted July 25th, 2012 ~ 9:59 am

Awww, fank you ever so much, Baby Butch for your comment. I am so vrey happy to hear you like the story. Which science fiction story does this story remind you of? Please do tell. *Bounces up and down eger to know and as curious as a cat. Meow* *Giggles*

I so love doding characters no one has ever heard of with the most unusual names too. For me it is another part of my creativness, also at the same time, it extends it, especially when I come up with special charater or place names or just making up a fictional language. Even though in that regard there is no real rule how to spell or pronounce a word or a name, however, with that said, I tend to always go with how I feel something is pronounced and how to spell it. That's the best I can explain it if anyone wants to know how I sometimes come up with these names or creat a fictional language.

The fictional language part is by far the most hardest, because as much as I understand it, because I am creating it, in the back of my mind I am always thinking in terms of what if someone was reading this and needs to at least get a sense for understanding this fictional language so it helps them to appreciate the story better.

So the process of creating even a fictional language is approached with some practical thought process and I go about it in that regard making the language make sense to the reader, I have done my stories with the line of thnking of what if someone else was reading my work, even though it was unlikely my work would ever be read by someone else.

Of course long since then I joined here and began to post stories here and the way I do my stories with that line of thinking has only become just as important, so I really give fictional names, languages etc. practical thought and use as best to what I feel to be right, in regards as to spelling and pronounciation of those names.

You are right about that little girl, she is important, its exciting for me doing this story as it is about two characters that in a way are the same person, but one is alien, the other is human, both lives nearly almost mirror each other and the two meet and become one.

Doing something like that along those lines is tricky as it is important not to get things mixed up between the alien world and the charcters etc. that exisit within all of that being mixed up or confused with the characters, etc. in my fictional Earth.

But I do love a good challenge and this is quite a challenging concept, I'm so happy and glad to be taking it on. Oh talking of of charcter names or place names in this story and how to pronounce them.

I do have a plan to do an apendix for this particular story. For now have fun guessing, not only that it not too important how to pronounce the names, I know it helps, though different people will have different ideas of how to pronounce a word or what feels right to them and that is OK.

For me I make up a name and I go with what feels right to me, so long as my readers of my stories can relate as best they can to my story, that is the most important thing, also that they do feel they want to come back and read more, I know and appreciate things like that are important to a story, a lot of things are. Personally for me above all, being as creative as possible is the first and foremost important thing of all.

Everything else a person works around and on the other points that are important, so long they do not become as import as being creative, because that will and does drain the persons creativity, this is coming from someone who knows, as that has happened to me, I try to proof read my work as I type, but do not focus too much on my spelling etc.

I have a spell checker and that helps, though I could have my word processing program check for grammer too, that would slow down the whole process of my story making.

I may not always get my commas in the right place etc. I am just glad that I know that paragraphing is important, though I have even seen in actual books sometimes two big chunks of paragraphs that could have been split it up into more even or as near to even paragraphs.

But that is only to my way of thinking and what makes sense to me, it does not make it though the right way, or paragraphs like that would not be in a published book. I would like to think no good publisher would make such an error.

Anyway, I am glad that you like the story, more glad that I actually got the idea for it. Since I feel that maybe my Xena story might be a bit too dark for everyone here. There is one scene that is graphic, not in a bad or gory way, just more in a dark and Gothic way, but still graphic if you get my menaing?

And there is no real way to tone down that particular scene. Because of the nature of the terrible evil that end up doing something that is quite shocking, but at least it was not gory as I saw the scene in my head and if I had toned it down, that whole scene would have lost its shock and gothic impact, it's one of those things that had to be there, if you can also get what I mean there too? Without that, that scene would not simply work and it had to be there, cutting it out was simply not even an option.

I finished my Xena story, which left me the one I had started before my Xena story. Then I suddenly get this idea from out of the blue, so I put that other story on hold again to do this one. But it is at least one I felt confident and happy with, to post here.

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Baby Butch

Posted July 26th, 2012 ~ 2:34 am

I'm sorry there is not one particuler story this reminded me of. I just meant it read like a Science Fiction story. I like the way you lay out your stories.

I don't like reading storys where the paragraphs go on and on covering half a page. For me it makes it hard to read and I get eye strain.

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baby5522

Posted July 26th, 2012 ~ 8:36 am

Awww, what a wonderful compliment, fank you so very much, baby butch. I happy beyond words can say that my story convayed the science fiction elelment to you. I have a different way of doing scifi on the whole, I can nto write things in the context of space battles etc.

Or shoot outs with laser guns or duels with laser swords etc. I have a way to do science fiction that I only hope it feels like it since I watch enough scifi my self. So that I am able to give that sense to my readers when I am doing science fiction, that the story does read like a science fiction story.

I know that most people who think scifi immediately think space battle and tech speak etc. Because there is usually in science fiction a lot of a cross between actual sience and imagined science.

Someimes I can come up with technilogical stuff, thoughon the whole, when I am doing scifi, I do not focus on the usual aspects of what is the most common and most used form of science fiction.

To me and only to my personal take on scifi, it is about the shear difference and strangeness, the alienness even of the world and the civilisations that live on that world, their customs, etc. That make my stories to be science fiction like.

My advice to anyone wanting to do science fiction stories is not to think they have to have space battles or scifi tech speak in it. True Science Fiction is about the unknown, the strangness of owther oother worlds and other beings.

To explore what makes them different, but also to be put in a context for anyone to be able to relate to. But without straying too far from waht makes the world alien and its people so alien and different to humanity.

Or if it is Earth ralated scifi, to go with their own interpritation of what is futuristic, use a bit of what they know as a guide line. But to let theri imagination to do the rest, though it can be hard if all that they can imagine are space battles scifi tech speak.

I am not syaing those things are done badly, they are done astonishingly well, but I do see a pattern, and most scifi stuff nearly all seems, feels and looks the same.

From the moment I began doing scifi, I wanted to do soemthing different, I was however inspired very much form the sual and moer common things that make good science fiction. I drew from those elements, yet at the same time, I incorporated my own brand of scifi, if you want to call it that.

True science fiction is about diversity, as so is Fantasy like tales, though those too do end up almost being like each other. Experimentation is key and the best thing to do in all and any story.

I do that a lot, I do nto know if something will or does work or not until I experiment a bit with stray ideas here and there, type them up, or sometimes write them down first on papaer with a pen.

Then apply those ideas to a story in my word proccessing document. Results do vary, it is vrey much a hit and miss process, but it is on the whole a worth while thing to do and would encourage you and everyone else to experiment with doing stories, not to just think or this or that idea wont work, not to dismiss readily or so easily and idea out of hand, try it out first, write it into your story, if it does not work, just delete or take out the part where it does nto work, be it on a computer or by hand and redoing a whole page.

Which by the way I have done that mroe times than I can count and it can get vrey thrustrating having to throw away a whole written page worths of work, just to do redo or correct what went wrong on the page that needs to be thrown away.

It wastes paper, not to mention ink use, having a word proccesors eliminates that, but there is having to delete a whole page or seciton of paragraphs to correct the mistake or what did not work.

I know the feeling all too well of just wanting to get on with the story, deletions etc. Only get in the way etc. True, all of that does happen and its hard, but any story is worth doing well to each own persons ability to do a story.

Also not to worry too much about for at least the beginners, the first or first few stories not being your best. My mst earlier ones were not and still not as good as my work is now. And I am truly OK and happy to admit that.

I feel no shame in it either, I am glad that the more I have done my stories that it has helped me to get better at doing them my stories have gone from strength to strength.

The more you do something, no mater waht it is, story writing, music making, etc. The more times you do what ever you like and love to do best, you truly do get better with each time, key thing is nto to ovrely focus so much on your work being better.

That will happen in its own time, it always has been that way, so go with the flow of things, the rewards are truly great, as a saying goes, all good things comes to those who wait and that is very much true.

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shilong

Posted July 26th, 2012 ~ 9:23 am

nice story so far. what will become of are hero. what dose his mom have plan for him. i wish i can live on gade with that lovely rain forest and high tech thing with lot of color butten to push.
you ask butch what sci-fi story this remind me of i would have to say dragon rider of pern. thay lost all there tech over 5000 year. so thay have only bio made dragon and hand full of rider to fighet a lifeform that fall from a rouger plant that kill ever thing live.

your sweet and lovely big sis
shi long

p.s. im a sci-fi geek but i love dragon more.

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baby5522

Posted July 26th, 2012 ~ 6:22 pm

Awww, fank you so very much Big Sis Shi for your comment. I am glad that you like my story, thank you for the information on that science fiction part about the dragon.

The B.I.K.E.S. in my story are slightly based on the Star Wars Speeders as featureed in Return of the Jedi, but are powerd biologically combind with technolgy as well.

It makes a more inteteresting idea. I would love to live on a planet like Jade too, it looked very much almost like the Forest Moon of Endor, only more better, with lovely rain forest mists lots of different greens, browns etc.

The most tropical thing I have ever seen/imagined, it is like looking at possibly what the Garden of Eden could have looked like in the beginning of Earth.

I like the main character, I know most will think I am thinking of another charcter called naruto. Please forgive the spelling if it slightly wrong, but can assure anyone no, my character does not share the same name as that character, the moment I got the name in my head, I instictively knew how it was going to be spelled like and how it's pronounced.

It's odd when that happens, but I am so glad it does, no matter how odd it seems. To help the reader a little better The a in Na'Ru is pronounced as a as in apple and the Ru part is the sound and pronouncation like saying the word saying Tutu.

Hope that helps you and every one? Do not ask why it is that way, like I said that is how it came to me and that felt right, I love it, it's quite an unusal name and it has this quality in like it almost jumps out, it stands out and it is very striking and does wonders for the imagination.

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sissydina218

Posted July 27th, 2012 ~ 4:44 am

love the start of this new story, love the mixing of science fiction and the other things i love perfect, can't wait to see where it goes from here

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SissyDesiree

Posted July 27th, 2012 ~ 7:31 am

This is an interesting science fantasy story. It will be fun to see where it leads next.

- Sissy Desiree

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baby5522

Posted July 27th, 2012 ~ 8:27 am

Fank you so vrey much Sissy Dina for your comment, much appreciated and glad that you like the story. It's been a while since I have done a science fiction type story, it feels good to be doing one.

*Hugs*

love the start of this new story, love the mixing of science fiction and the other things i love perfect, can't wait to see where it goes from here

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baby5522

Posted July 27th, 2012 ~ 8:30 am

Awwww, fank you so very much, SissyDesiree for you comment, I am very hapy that you like the story too. I will be posting the next part soon.

*Hugs*

This is an interesting science fantasy story. It will be fun to see where it leads next.

I LOVE BEING A SISSY BABY PET

'Ask not what you can do for a Sissy. Ask a Sissy what they can do for you.'

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baby5522

Posted July 28th, 2012 ~ 6:35 am

A New Life

For

Na'Ru

Queen Gaia had a smile on her face, though she was not happy of the fact of what she now had to do to ensure the very safety of her son. There was really no other way and there was no time for questions, which he will certainly ask. Not looking forward to the aspect of ordering her son to go so against his macho nature, his life was on the line, like it or not, he will have to do as ordered, or be be dead.

"Son... Please come with me... and quickly please.” Na'Ru blinked at his mother, she never calls him son, she has always called him by his first name... As she took hold of his hand, Na'Ru stepped back as though afraid of her. “That is really you isn't it mother?”
"Yes of course it is Na'Ru. I'm sorry I called you son, but what I need you to do is very important, your life is in danger Na'Ru, I wont see you or have you be killed by that evil Goddess Flamessa.”

"I wont let her kill me Mother, but if I am to die in battle, then that is the warrior way.”
"I wont have you throw your life away like that. Please come with me Na'Ru, please do not make me have to order you.” Replied Queen Gaia tearfully. Na'Ru was alarmed to see his mother upset like this. Na'Ru was nearly almost frozen to the spot when he heard the words that were spoken to him by Magi. “For your own safety Na'Ru, do as your mother tells you to do.”

"I shall come with you mother.” Na'Ru replied. He was starting to fill odd all of a sudden, but did not know what it was exactly. But now was not a good time to let that trouble him, in time he will find out what ever that is all about. He gladly let his mother take him by his hand and lead him to her chamber, surprisingly it was still all intact. The rest of the huge fortress that was the grand Royal Empire Castle was being burnt down or destroyed by other means of destruction.

Queen Gaia went over toward a dress up box, it was full of dress up clothes she had when she had been but a little girl, she was able to keep them being of noble birth. Queen Gaia though had hoped that she would have a baby girl so that she could pass on down to her the dress up box. There was a dress up outfit for every age up to 10 yarns old, girls of 11 and up stopped playing dress up and no longer had any need to do so. There was one outfit that would and could possibly fit Na'Ru.

He was not very tall for a Jade Male, he was not too small either, he was 5 foot and 4 inches tall, though most Jade males were at 6 foot and over. Na'Ru was very slim for a male too. Na'Ru had felt equally disappointed with himself for not looking or being like the man he thought he should aught to be. Right now however, it was a blessing and a God send that he was slim enough for what Queen Gaia now had in mind for him. She had finished getting out all that she needed, placed each item of clothing out onto her bed.

Na'Ru had not seen what she was doing, he was so consumed with why he was suddenly feeling different in some way, but the problem was, was that he did not know what it was. Queen Gaia soon faced her son. “Na'Ru!!!!” She slighted shouted as she noticed that her son seemed to what appeared to be day dreaming. Na'Ru was snapped out of it, he turned to face his mother. “Oh I'm sorry mother... I seem to have something on my mind.”

Did he suspect now what just in mind she had for him? Queen Gaia had to remind her self that she had to do what was necessary to save her son. Once away and in a place of safety, her son would be safe and then can be a man again. Though she felt that so long as Na'Ru was alive, no matter where he maybe. The truth was he would have to remain in disguise indefinitely, for the rest of his life. Queen Gaia was not any more happier about that prospect either, but it seemed there was no other way.

"Son, what I am about to ask of you to do, is not easy for me, it wont be easy for you either. But your life will always be in danger, no matter where we go....” Na'Ru looked nervous and a little bit worried too. “What are you trying to say mother?” Tears fell down Queen Gaia's cheeks, she then moved away so that he could get a real good look at what she had laid out on the bed. Na'Ru looked at them, but looked confused, he turned and looked at his mother.
"Mother... I don't understand, these are your Pretty Princess Dress up clothes that you had when you were a little girl.”

"I do not have time to explain son. Please believe me that this is for your own good. Your life in fact depends on it.” Na'Ru looked really worried and even more confused than ever. “I still do not understand what you are trying to get at or tell me mother...”
"Well, there is no easy way for me to tell you this, other than, I need you to firstly, trust me. Secondly, I need you to take off all of your clothes and thirdly, I....”

Queen Gaia could hardly bring her self to say it, but she knew she had to, even make it an order. Robbing her son of his manliness was a terrible act. She wished that Jade had never put his mark on her son in the first place. But nothing much could change that. Queen Gaia took a deep breath. and finally said, what she needed to say. “I need you to put those items of clothes on, which I have laid out on the bed for you. I know they will fit you and I will help you with putting on some of the items.”

"Mother, are you wanting me to be like a girl?”
"Yes Na'Ru, I am. It hurts me to ask you this and I do not want to order you into being like one. But I will if I must.”
"Mother, would it... would it be very wrong of me to actually want to be like a girl?” Queen Gaia could hardly believe her ears. “What?” Suddenly, Na'Ru seem to get upset and began to burst out crying. “Please do not be cross or angry with me. I do not know why I suddenly feel this way, or how... Is there something wrong with me mother?”

Queen Gaia quickly went over to her son and hugged him, he hugged her in return sobbing. “Oh Na'Ru.... No, there is nothing wrong with you at all, so long as you are really suer you truly want this, not just because I am asking you to do so in order to save your very life.” Remarked Queen Gaia also in tears herself. “Yes mother, sincerely so, even though I do not yet fully understand or why... With all of my heart and soul I truly wish to be your Sissy son.”

The term Sissy and what it means was exactly the same as it was on Earth. Queen Gaia was not sure how or what had changed Na'Ru, or why. But the news was more than she could have ever hoped or wish to ask for. “Oh Na'Ru.... You have no idea how happy that makes me to hear that...”
"Really, Mommy?” Replied Na'Ru in a surprisingly wonderful high pitched girl like voice. Queen Gaia cried teas of happiness.

"Yes, really and truly so.” Queen Gaia soon broke the embrace... “We will have a chance to hug each other more and talk about this new change in you Na'Ru... But for now, I need you to quickly please, to get undressed.”
"Yes Mommy, I understand.” Replied Na'Ru. The voice was so wonderfully girlie like, sweet and full of innocence, it was perfect.

It really surprised Queen Gaia that he was even remotely capable of talking in such a way, but was so very glad he could, it will make disguising him be all that much more better. Na'Ru took no time at all in getting undressed. He immediately went over towards the frilly panties he saw, they were adorned with a lovely mass of frills that went all the way round from front to back with bows also going all the way round too.

Queen Gaia saw the shear delight in Na'Ru's eyes, as he began to put them on, he felt his flesh all tingle as he slid the panties over his feet and up his legs, his little boy-hood suddenly hardened, but he did not seem to feel embarrassed or ashamed. His mother could not help notice too as she watched Na'Ru get dressed, she did help him with the item of clothing he needed help with, like the petticoats, and the dress. She had brushed and styled Na'Ru's hair. Queen Gaia stood back now to get a good look at her Sissy son.

She blinked hardly able to believe her eyes... She suddenly began to cry. “What is the matter Mommy? Do I really look so bad?” Asked Na'Ru with concern... Queen Gaia shook her head... “Oh no Na'Ru, not at all, you simply look so adorable...” She replied, she quickly took hold of his hand and lead him over to the full length mirror. Na'Ru looked at himself, a pretty girl in a very pretty frilly pink dress, blinked and look back at him in equal shock and surprise. “Wow.... is that... really.... Me!” Gasped Na'Ru in shock.

"Yes sweetie it is. Say, have you chosen a name for your self?”
"Actually I have not thought of one.” Queen Gaia smiled. “May I give you your new name?”
"I would be honoured Mommy” Replied Na'Ru. Queen Gaia quickly gave him a hug. “I have always wanted to have a girl. But having a Sissy son is even better. I now name thee... Nyssa...”
"Oh thank you so much Mommy, I love that name.” Queen Gaia was overwhelmed with happiness.

But the sudden realisation that the danger was not yet over soon hit her. “How careless of me... We need to get out and away from here Nyssa, now...” She remarked in a panicked voice. Nyssa understood why, she could sense the fear of danger in her mother. She grabbed hold of her mother's hand and let her lead her out of the castle. Suddenly, Magi appeared from nowhere... “Magi...” Gasped Queen Gaia in surprised and shock.

"I have no time for explanations... You wont so easily escape Flamessa on foot or by horse for that mater. I can open up a portal for you, enter it. Don't worry, you shall both arrive at place where you shall be very safe and more importantly a place where she can not find you....” Replied Magi very mysteriously. To which he suddenly made a ring of stone of some kind appear before Queen Gaia and Nyssa. “Step into the portal now, both of you. This shall be my last gift to you both...” Both Queen Gaia and Nyssa had already stepped into the portal, but Magi's final words somehow had reached them, by the time they could react, they were suddenly transported to another world...

TO BE CONTINUED....

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sissydina218

Posted July 29th, 2012 ~ 1:09 pm

really like the way the story turned, was kinda expecting it but now am wondering if naru/nyssa will become a normal sissy or a warrior sissy its really cool.

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baby5522

Posted July 29th, 2012 ~ 2:42 pm

Awww, fank you so very much Sissydina for your comment, much appreciated, I wont say in which way things will turn out for Na'Ru/Nyssa, he/she could end up as a normal Sissy or a Warrior Sissy. That is for the fates to decide. *Giggles*

I'm not giving anything away, just keep coming back to this story to chek for updates and you will find out for your self where things will lead for the main character of this story. I am glad that you like the story and are thinking in ways of what the character could end up being.

*Hugs*

really like the way the story turned, was kinda expecting it but now am wondering if naru/nyssa will become a normal sissy or a warrior sissy its really cool.

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shilong

Posted July 31st, 2012 ~ 5:12 am

sweet are hero what to be a sweet littler girl for his mommy. so where dose at portal go. will thay see there home ever agian. you can tell me sis plese. this story so good.

your sweet big sis
shi long

come to the light

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baby5522

Posted July 31st, 2012 ~ 8:05 am

Awww, fank you for the comment Big Sis Shi, I would love to tell you where the portal leads and if Queen Gaia and Nyssa will see their home world ever again. But if I did that, that would spoil the story.

I would not want to do that, I am giving nothing away, I will say this, by the next instalment you and those who have made comments and viewers that don't comment, will see the introduction of the other Na'Ru, as story outline says, there are two boys with similar lives, both are the same person but live in alternate realities to each other, how they will meet each other, is something that is close guarded top secret, so secret, that not even the Pentagon or the White House knows about it. *Giggles*

Use your imagination, it's nice to havbe people guessing or imagining the outcome of what is going to happen next or how events may turn out. some may come to the same conclusions, others may have other ideas.

I sure hope so. I would be so happy knowing that all those who make comments and those that don't are comming up with what they think and feel is going to happen in the story and see how close or how far off they are. I want this story to fuel everyones own imagination, to let that fill in of what is going to happen next. If I know that this story is having that efffect, then I know I have done a job well done, I encourage everyone to guess, let their imaginations run wild.

It not important how wrong or right they are as to how the story will turn out or events in the story. This story is meant to put the rader in the shoes of Na'Ru and then to open their imagination with as many possibilities as they wish or want to imagin what will happen to them in the lines of thinking themselves of being the main charcter, or they can imagine to be a different character.

It does nto matter what they or your self imagine, so long as you are imagining something something, that is all that matters. Have fun with your imagination, see where it leads you. Don't be disapointed or feel let down if your imagination does not match up with my story, the pointis that you had fun with your own imagination.

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Baby Butch

Posted July 31st, 2012 ~ 9:47 pm

Your story is getting exciting in more than one way, he he. Na'Ru likes being sissyboy Nyssa and his new life as a female. The ending is also exciting with the Portal opening and them stepping thru. At this point it reminds me a bit of Stargate on TV. I think it reminds me a bit of Startrek with Na'Ru being a tuff Clingon type willing to die in battle.

Keep up the good work, I love the story!

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baby5522

Posted August 1st, 2012 ~ 8:33 am

Wow, oh wow.... What huge compliments to say my story in parts to be like Stargate and Star Trek, both of which are very good shows. Fank you ever so much for the compliments Baby Butch.

You have made my day with those compliments, *Beams at you with a very big smile on my face and gives you a Big Hug.* Perhaps Na'Ru is the very first Sissy Klingon *Giggles*

I can see where you get the Klingon reference from with his being of a similar skin tone to one. I was nearly going to go with the Jade people having green skin, but felt that was too much Orion Slave Girl like and most people thinking in those terms.

Not that there is anything wrong with that, but I am not trying on a concious level to do characters or a race of beings that are related too much to any one show. The ring of stone as the portal though stargate like.

It had no shevrons on it, or have a DHD. My ring of stone is more based to a stone arch though yes it looks almost like a stargate, only this stone portal arch appears in a very old PSOne game called Darkstone.

Though I am not upset you thought my stone ring was like something from Stargate, I think any ring stone that has a portal to it will make lots of people immediately think stargate and that is ok, I have watched all of the Stargate SG1 series and it's spin off series, SG Atlantis and SG Universe.

All of which have been top quality shows. So it is truly an honour to have the distinction that parts of my story come across being like Stargate and Star Trek, I can not thank you enough.

*Hugs & Kisses.*

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baby5522

Posted August 2nd, 2012 ~ 5:00 pm

The Journey Part 1:

Earth, China, 2585 AD

So much had happen other the years on Earth, some good, some bad. Things however had begun to improve and in some ways it was like reliving the 1980's all over again, frilly skirts etc. were in fashion, even frilly bikini bottoms was a huge hit all over the world. There was not a girl anywhere that was not wearing something with frills on it. Frills were the biggest thing and all the females of every age could not get enough of them.

Not that all of the guys could or would ever want to complain about as frills made all the females cute and sexy. There was still some things that were not exactly perfect. Like Tu-Long a city that was mostly ran by mob gangs, they would kill anyone who ever so much enter the city. When they were not doing that, they were killing off anyone who was not part of their gangs. Tu-Long however was outside of China's protection as it were, even though the city itself was in China.

But the mob gangs seem to have a way to buy them off and keep them from bringing in the army to clear them out of the city. So long the gangs did not cross over into other territories and began terrorising them, then the ruling founders of China did and would not send in anyone to rid the city of the gang members that ruled over Tu-Long City. Teri-ling was packing clothes into a suitcase, when her son Na'Ru suddenly had come home. She feared that every time he went out for what ever he needed to go out for, that one day he would never come back.

Na'Ru looked shocked, puzzled and confused all in one go as he saw his mother packing a few suitcases. “Mother... what are you doing?” Teri-ling turned around and did not look too impressed with him. “Is that all you have to say for your self? I worry my self to death every time you go out, not only that you should have been back here ages ago. What does it look like I'm doing?” Na'Ru looked really shocked. “You're packing... I did not know you were going to go on holiday mother.”

"I'm not going on holiday. I am getting us out of here.” Na'Ru looked even more shocked and confused. “What? But mother, you know full well, that we can not ever escape this place.”
"Well that is where you are wrong son...” Came a sudden voice from nowhere, Na'Ru turned to see who had suddenly spoken to him.

Stood before him was a man wearing some kind of a uniform. His hair was fair, he had blue eyes, he had spoken with an American accent, he was of average build and height. “Who the heck are you?” Demanded Na'Ru. His mother, however, got very cross with him. “Na'Ru, where are your manners? This is Captain Ross Kline of The Federal Alliance Core. The Federation of America have given us consent to be given asylum.” Just when he thought he could not be even more shocked than what he already was.

Na'Ru was so shocked, he was nearly almost speechless, but he managed to reply. “Since when? How comes I was not aware you have been secretly going over to America and seeking the help and aid of the American Federation?” Teri was furious with her son. “Why should you really care what I do or have done? You really aught to be grateful that I have manage to get us a safe haven to go to. You are too busy doing what ever do when you go out there, not caring if you come back home or not....”

Teri began to cry. “You're my son and I love you, I care about you, not that any of that actually really matters to you anyway. If it did, you would not leave me to worry about if you are going to return home or not. Na'Ru felt bad inside. “I'm sorry mother, I did not realise...”
"I hate to brake things up, but we need to go like right now before my presence here is detected.” Interrupted Captain Kline with a sense of urgency to his voice.

Teri-Ling turned to face him. “You're absolutely right Captain Kline.”
"Wait... what about my clothes and my stuff? I have not even had the chance to pack everything yet.”
"I'm sorry son, we do not have time for that.”
"Captain Kline is right, beside Na'Ru, if you had come home as you were meant to, you would have had the time needed to have packed all of your stuff. I will have to get you new clothes and other stuff once we are in America.”

Na'Ru could hardly believe his ears, but his mother had given him the sort of look that told him she was not a mood for him to argue, and that he was to do as he was told or he would be in real trouble if he don't. Reluctantly Na'Ru with a heavy sigh replied. “Okay, I'm sorry, lets go.” Teri picked up the few suitcases she had packed, walked over towards Captain Kline, stood at the right side of him, Na'Ru stood on his left, then suddenly as Captain Kline activated some kind of silent locator relay device which Na'Ru had not seen.

A golden luminous glow completely surrounded each of them, to which Na'Ru knew this to be a transporter beam of some kind, obviously, this one was the kind that could not be detected. People could beam anywhere, but they could always be easily tracked down, no matter where they beamed to. They re-materialised inside some kind of a clinic facility. “Welcome Mrs Ling to America, this here is the Santa Monica District Health Centre.” Greeted a slim and beautiful blonde haired lady dressed in a long white jacket, the type most medical doctors wear.

"I'll leave these two in your medical care Doctor Carlton. I will back to pick them up once you are done with giving them their Bio-dampeners...”
"Bio What?” Remarked Na'Ru in a sudden gasp of shock. “Oh, nothing for you to worry about son, but I'm sure that the good Dr here shall explain it to you.” With those words, Captain Kline, briskly walked off. “I would be happy to...”

Replied Doctor Carlton. “Hi, I am Doctor Carlton and simply put, a Bio-dampener is a biological chip that can dampen and also prevent anyone from China from being able to track you down, using their Bio-scanners. Once they can not find you, they will assume you have been taken by someone, but won't be able to track down whom, therefore, you shall both be declared as dead...”
"What?”

Gasped Na'Ru in shock. “But why?” Doctor Carlton could well understand Na'Ru's shock. “The moment a person becomes an unregistered Bio-Citizen of any Region, District, State or Province. Are automatically assumed to be no longer part of that Region etc. and therefore, considered to be no longer a living member of the community.” Na'Ru looked as though he was going to cry. “There is no need for you to feel sad or upset Na'Ru. At the same time you shall be given a new and unique Bio-Chip, which in turn will give you and your mother here, a new Bio-Signature”

"What does that mean exactly?”
"That means Na'Ru, that you and your mother will register as new Bio-Citizens of the United Federation of America.” Replied Doctor Carlton with a warm smile. America had long stopped being a united states or more to the point referred to as such since the Bio-Wars. The most devastating biological wars in all of history. Biological War fare had begun in early 2012, which then escalated to more and more biological wars being waged on warring countries everywhere, to which lead to mass death and destruction on such a scale, that nearly ended all of humanity.

Of those who managed to survive and repopulate the Earth, vowed to never use biological weapons ever again in any war. Though instead in an unexpected twist, the biology of people was used as a means to keep everyone all tagged, even controlled if they seemed not to be conforming to what ever dictation a person was under. Once that had gotten started, soon those who had the power and ability to dictate, took full advantage of human tagging and human control, it was the most efficient form against violence and terrorism among other anti-social behaviour, etc.

The ones in power were the Masters, so to speak, and the people under them were nothing more than their slaves/pets, to do what ever was commanded of them to do. The people obeyed, or be punished if they did not. There were some that did not believe in this sort of thing or approved of it. Though it was something these people could simply make go away, at best, they came up with Bio-dampener Technology, as well as to create a powerful super chip capable of emitting a unique Biological Signature that would be detected and seen as belonging to a person born and raised in America.

The advancement in technology had quadrupled over the years, 2012 was the starting point of it all, new and better gadgets to I-Phones, I-Pods, Tablets, WIFI, it was simply never ending, there was a new technological thing coming out quicker than humanity to keep up with, never mind try to catch up to, not that anyone complained, people loved their new gadgets. This had become so much the In Thing as they used to say and the way of of life for everyone, it was not surprising then that humanity had lost it's way.

They practically had stopped being people almost, so turning them into obedient slaves seemed too good of an opportunity to pass up. Most seemed to conform, those that did not, it was only to easy to find ways to change them. America had declared world wide independence from all of the countries around the world. When that happened, the birth of the Foundation was formed. USA, then got changed to UFA. “You and your mother will also be given new identities.” Remarked Dr Carlton, to which Teri gave a huge smile, little did Na'Ru know of what new identity she had in mind for him...

TO BE CONTINUED.....

I LOVE BEING A SISSY BABY PET

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baby5522

Posted August 2nd, 2012 ~ 5:13 pm

As so not to confuse the readers. This Na'Ru is not the one from planet Jade. He is the one from an alternate realitity. They are one in the same person, though existing as two different species in two different realities, which will soon colide, the two will meet each other and become one.

Please bare this in mind before commentating, thank you.

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Baby Butch

Posted August 4th, 2012 ~ 1:05 am

I see we have a second Na'Ru and another mother in a different situation. The story is interesting with all the technical information about the 2 countries.

I want to see what Na'Ru's new identity is going to be. I could guess that he will become a girl. What will he be wearing? Great story please continue!

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baby5522

Posted August 4th, 2012 ~ 7:48 am

Awww, fank you for the comment Baby Butch. Much appreciated as always. I am glad to see that you like this part of the story. It's a lovely complexed idea of someone living a another life, but are essentially the same person living near similar lives.

The Jade Na'Ru had to leave his home world and become a girl to escape the evil Flamessa. This Na'Ru had to leave his home country to escape the gang lords of China. You are going to love what he ends up waring, it may even surprises you and hopefully my readers too.

I will post the next installment once all of the other comments have been made. It was nice doing technological stuff for a change. It can be fun and challanging too, to come up with fictional futuristic technology.

What makes it easier for me doing that, my imagined technology has no actual basis of scientific fact, fictional technology does not need to be, so long as it reads and feels like something that could quite possibly exist.

There are many different kinds of futures, some are filled with grand and wodnerful technology, others have done away with the need of technology, I like to read those kind of stories where great and wonderful technology imagined or with some based of science fact in it, are not driven by all of that, of how the people live, form even new religions etc.

The structure of that society and what they do for entertainment etc. What kind of clothes they wear, there are manner of things that present itself in very interesting ways, and technology is only grounded in more practical means, like a machine that cooks food, that sort of thing, but things like laser guns, teleporters are not in use or exist.

That kind of thing, though I know other people have their own like and brand of scifi. Like all elements of scifi and fanatasy based sotries. I sometimes like to do things that go beyond those elements, mixing them up sometimes too, can be fun.

I love to always experiment with ideas, they help to keep my stories interesting, exciting, as different as I can make them be. I am always thinking to my self. 'Now what haven't I done before or yet.'

It's not always easy to come up with something different. Something I know other authors strive for and do and I encourge you, them to think sometimes out of the box, as the saying goes, like I have said before in another reply here, experimenting with ideas is key to good story development and gaining new creative ideas.

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shilong

Posted August 6th, 2012 ~ 9:59 am

nice but sad to see world go bio-warfer. the dna tracker is sad to see too. thay have good thing but if someone what to make ever on a slaver agint ther will thay can. like the mother plan to do to her son.

what do these two have do with are hero and her mother. plest tell me i what tell a soul.

your sweet big sis
shi long

come to the light

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baby5522

Posted August 6th, 2012 ~ 11:38 am

Awww, fank you for your comment Big Sis Shi. I have given away to a little dagree that the Two Na'Ru's to be the same person but living in two different realities. Even that they will meet each other, I really would not want give out any more than that.

Plus I post each part as I finish it, I usually post after a story is already complete, that way it is easier to post each part. This time, things are different, I am typing each part and though I have a vague idea of the plot etc.

Anything can still happen or go in a direction even I least may expect, the story is very much experimental and I am letting it develop really right before my very eyes, I do not know which way things are going to go fully until I have finished each part.

There is a new world that awaits the other Na'Ru and his mother, they learn of something they are shocked to learn. But there is shock and a surprise about the human version of Na'Ru that waits and lies around the corner.

I really can not say any more than that since I'm still doing the next part. Things may change, I have no real idea which direction this story will take or lead me. Like you and evreyone here reading this story.

This story is truly experimental, a roller coster that can go in any direction, take turns you can not and don't see coming, where it will end, not even I know as yet. We are all in this big roller coster ride together, so to speak.

I have a rough idea of the end, but nothing fixed, I am letting story grow as I type it all out. Just how The Scarlet Lady was, that began as a complete experiment, I was not sure how far it would go, if I would finish it or not. But I stuck to it and that turned out better than I had hoped it would.

This story I am going to do the same, just stick with it, see what turns out. I very rarely experiment in this way, by posting something that is not even yet finished, though I have a good feeling about this experiment.

*wuv, huggles & kwisses*

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baby5522

Posted August 10th, 2012 ~ 6:36 am

The New World

The City Of Albion, Caledonia, 2595 ads:

Queen Gaia and her Sissy son, Nyssa looked on in awe of the wonder that was now before them. A gleaming city, of tall spires, buildings of all shapes and sizes, somehow blended well with lovely green landscapes with flowers, fountains, there was even an ocean in the distance too. Mother, where are we?” Asked Nyssa, slightly afraid and yet excited at the same time. “I do not know...”
"But I do, quickly follow me, you are not safe here, out in the open.”

Both Queen Gaia and Nyssa turned to see who had suddenly spoken to them. A young woman of no more than 20 yarns old wearing a lovely white short dress, with gold lace trim, of almost near Greek like style, stood before them. She had sandals on her feet, a flower at the side of her long golden like hair, she had glowing sapphire blue eyes and her skin was milky white. “Who or what are you my dear lady?” Asked Queen Gaia in surprise. “I will be more than happy to answer your questions Queen Gaia, but you need to come with me, quickly.”

Replied the strange beautiful woman with panic in her voice. “Why, what's wrong? Wait? How do you know who I am?”
"Please, Queen Gaia, I beg of you to follow me...” Replied the strange woman, who seemed to be so very frightened, Queen Gaia looked worried, obviously there was some kind of danger she was not aware of, yet everything seemed so calm and pleasant, so very pleasant, but she did not need to be told further, sensing what ever unseen danger there was, the woman's tone of fear had convinced her to do as she asked.

Queen Gaia, quickly took hold of Nyssa's hand and followed the strange woman to what looked to be like some sort of a cemetery, as the woman guided her and Nyssa, she looked around her nervously, as though being afraid of being watched or seen, the strange woman stopped before a mausoleum that had a statue set atop of it, which was an odd thing to be sure, for even the statue was not one of some kind of what would be close to being like an angel. Of all things a menacing kind of Dragon like creature with red glowing eyes, seem to guard this mausoleum.

There was a Gothic wrote iron like fence that surrounded the mausoleum, the entrance doors were of black Gothic design too. Odder even still that it had windows along its sides, looking almost like a small outhouse of some kind, as if the dead need to have windows, stained glass windows at that and they too were also of Gothic design. There was equally a Gothic Wrote iron like gate, locked with thick chains and a huge Gothic looking kind of padlock locking the chains into place, which only added to the whole menacing Gothic look to it all.

Who or what ever would want to have a mausoleum like this? Queen Gaia got an uneasy feeling the moment she noticed the strange woman producing suddenly from nowhere a big Gothic looking key that had a skulls head on the end of it, to which the woman approached that Gothic looking padlock. It opened the moment the key had been put into place.

The strange woman then removed the heavy set looking chains, then opened the wrote iron gate, she stepped up to the Gothic looking door of the mausoleum and placed the same key she had used on the padlock into the lock of the entrance door, to Queen Gaia's shock and disbelief, the entrance door to the mausoleum opened with an eerie creek, the sort you would get out of one of those old style Hammer Horror Movies, that makes one shiver by the shear sound of it.

"Quick in here?” Remarked the strange woman, once the door to the mausoleum was unlocked. But Queen Gaia was not so sure now if she and her Sissy son were safe in the presence of this woman. “How do I know that I can trust you?”
"In Magi's name I swear to you I mean you no harm. Please, step inside, we are not safe, not even out here.”

There was no way this woman could be some sort of a spy, Queen Gaia had never seen this woman's species ever before, so there was no way she could ever know of Magi, or know anything about him. Which could only mean, that Magi himself somehow knew of this strange place, of the strange beings that live here, met one of them and told that person about her and her son. Queen Gaia at least knew that such incredible things was possible with Magi.

She now saw no real reason not to trust this strange woman, she took hold of Nyssa's hand who seemed to be a little scared, not surprising really, considering how mausoleum looks like. But as she stepped inside following after the strange woman, expecting to see an even more Gothic kind of a grave or even a coffin itself. To her shear utter surprise, there was steps inside, leading downward. What surprised her even more was a huge, but a wonderful and grand hall with grand statues, paintings, furniture and beautifully crafted stained glass windows, that looked far better and wonderful than those Gothic looking stained glass windows on the side of the mausoleum.

"You are safe now. I apologise in which the way I greeted you Queen Gaia, my name is Tamara Sion. I am also of the sisterhood, to you I am a friend, and have the fortunate pleasure of having met Magi from your world.”
"I am pleased to meet you Tamara, also I am glad that you have met Magi, put prey tell what are you and where are we exactly?”
"I am a Caledonian and you Queen Gaia are on planet Caledonia.”
"I have heard about your world, but to my kind it is but a myth.”
"As so are the Jade beings from the planet Jade to my people, your kind are believed to be nothing more than myths. In fact if my people were to learn that you are indeed very much real, you would be subjected to being dissected for scientific research...”

Queen Gaia looked shocked and horrified. “Surely your own kind would not do such a thing!”
"Sad to say Queen Gaia, as good and kind, my very race are, that is something they can and will do in the name sake of scientific discovery. Which was the very reason of why my hastiness to get you here Queen Gaia, no one can trace us here.”

"In that case thank you Tamara, I am in your debt for saving my life and that of my Sissy Son here, Nyssa.”
"You are most welcome Queen Gaia.”
"Please I am not of your world, my title has no meaning here, please do call me Gaia.”
"You are most kind Gaia. From here I am to take you to the sisterhood, they will be able to help disguise you and your Sissy son.”

"I don't understand, disguise in what way?”
"To make you look like you are one of us, a Caledonian.”
"How can they do that?”
"With the use of magic... It is something here too that some believe in.”
"You mean not all of your kind believe in magic?”
"Sadly, Gaia, not all of my kind believe in magic, ever since science took over things.”

"That is a great shame.”
"That is so very true Gaia, please follow me, the sisterhood is not so much a convent, but a special elite coven of women. Dedicated to the magic arts. Good magic of course.” Remarked Tamara reassuringly. “That is good to know.” Replied Gaia with the sound of relief to her voice, she took hold of Nyssa's hand and took her with her, as she followed Tamara out of the grand hall.

They soon entered into a chamber, which was odd, as it had a stone circle inside of it, stood inside the stone circle, were hooded robed figures. As Tamara lead Gaia and Nyssa into the stone circle, the hooded robed figures removed their hoods, to reveal faces of very beautiful women, all of which had long shimmering golden blonde hair and glowing blue eyes. “Sisters, I present to thee, Gaia and Nyssa from the planet Jade.” Announced Tamara proudly.

"Welcome to Caledonia Gaia and Nyssa. We shall make you both appear and be like us in every way. No one shall know or be able to see or even detect your true origins. We have lots to tell you, now, please stand centre of this stone circle, close your eyes, trust in us, you and your Sissy son shall not come to any harm.” Remarked all of the robed female figures that were stood inside the stone circle, though it was said all at once, their voices were almost like a chorus, as they resonated with an almost musical quality to them.

Gaia instinctively trusted them, she held Nyssa's hand and stepped into the centre of the stone circle. The inner circle of the sisterhood, as it were all joined hands together, apart from Tamara, she stood to face Gaia and Nyssa,. “Now Gaia, you take and hold my left hand, Nyssa, I need you to take and hold my right hand.” Remarked Tamara Both, Both Gaia and Nyssa did as instructed to do. They felt a strange surge pass through them, a glow of light surrounded Tamara's body, it passed down her arms and surrounded both Gaia and Nyssa.

"It is done.” Came the sudden voice of Tamara, somehow a full length mirror had been brought into the stone circle, both Gaia and Nyssa looked at their reflections with shear amazement and disbelief. They both looked like Caledonians in every way. “Wow!” The both said together at the same time. “You are both now one of us. Come, we can now go to a place where we can talk.” Remarked Tamara. “Thank you, I really can not thank you enough Tamara.”
Said Gaia sounding astounded and so grateful of Tamara's help.

"Helping two legends such as your self and your Sissy son is more than thanks enough.” Replied Tamara with a warm smile, she lead Gaia and Nyssa out of the sub level stone circle like area, and was brought forth to what looked to be like some sort of living quarters, there was a sofa, two chairs, other furniture etc. that Gaia did not recognise or what they were. “Please, do be seated, food and drink shall be brought to you. Now we can talk.” Both Gaia and Nyssa sat down and talked.

Tamara told them of the time when Magi had visited them, and of the history of Jade, surprisingly Tamara had been told about the great and terrible Dark Storm, though it was not exactly a storm as such, but that was the only name the people of Jade could give it and that was what had stuck, something they never knew of and did not even know what it really was exactly only than being some kind of a dark force that nearly destroyed them and their world, it took all the combined powers of all of the most powerful wizards to disperse the Dark storm, but completely destroy it, they could not.

One day it would return and the people of Jade will have to leave their home world completely, though nothing can escape this Dark Storm, it destroys all things, not just life, whole worlds, galaxies, but the people of Jade soon began to no longer believe in the Dark Storm, but had kept the dating system. BDS: Before the Dark Storm, ADS: After the Dark Storm. Most of the most powerful wizards had been reduced down to only a few and in time they had grown weak and died, that lead to magic being lost and no one believing in it any more.

Magi had become the last of the wizards and still had all of his magic. Though he did not reveal how or why. A mystery that shall never be solved. Gaia and Nyssa sat on the sofa amazed and astonished beyond belief... “Now you know the whole thing about how we come to know Magi.” Remarked Tamara. “Yes, thank you ever so much for telling us all about your people and how Magi came to your world.” Replied Gaia with a happy tone.

"I always suspect Magi had been keeping things from me and now I know.... Yes Tamara, thank you for telling us all about it....” Came a sudden and unexpected, yet sinister voice, Tamara, Gaia and Nyssa turned to face who had suddenly spoken to them. A woman of flames floated in the air in front of them all... “No...... it can not be... it can not be.......” Remarked Gaia with distraught.... “He promised me that you would never be able to find me here...” Tamara was at the ready and her hands were a glow with some kind of energy balls she was ready to fire at Flamessa.

"Don't worry, your precious Magi had not deceived you, I nearly almost could not find you. I had already however had when you were not aware of it placed a cleverly hidden tracker on you. It had stopped working, which got me very annoyed, it has taken me centuries of Jade time to find a way to re connect with the tracker. So, I see you have feminised your son.... A very wise choice Gaia, but that is not going to stop me from destroying your son.”
"I won't let you do that.” Came another sudden voice...

"No.... it can't be... I completely destroyed you....” Retorted Flamessa in as much shock as what Tamara, Gaia and Nyssa were when she had turned up out of nowhere. “Magi!” Shrieked Gaia in surprise. The familiar form of Magi with his beard, his wand and wizard's robe floated at the same level that Flamessa was at. Just a few inches above ground height... “Oh but by destroying me Flamessa, that made me become even far more powerful than you can ever imagine...” Replied Magi in a very mysterious tone of voice.

"What?” Remarked Gaia in shock disbelief... “I have no time to explain... Tamara, you know of the place I told you to take her if something like this was to occur?”
"Yes Magi!” Replied Tamara even more mysteriously... “What is going on?... I need to know!” Demanded Gaia. “There is no time for explanations, you will do well my good Queen to let Tamara take you to the most sacred of places. Go now, while you still can.” Replied Magi, Gaia knew deep down that there was no one in all of Jade she did and could ever trust more.

She took hold of Nyssa's hand and ran, following Tamara as she lead the way. “Now lets dance you and I?” Said Magi in mock gesture to Flamessa. “I did not come here to dance. I shall destroy you a thousand times if I have to Magi, you wont stop from destroying that little runt Na'Ru and his soppy excuse for a mother, queen Gaia.”
"Your words hold no meaning to me, if fighting with words is all that you have, then I will destroy you as easily as a fire destroys a whole forest.”

"I do not know how you were destroyed, I don't think you were, you let me somehow believe I had destroyed you. There is no way that you can destroy me Magi. I am a Goddess.” Boomed Flamessa in a very loud voice. Magi simply just smiled. “You simply have no idea just what kind of powers I truly do have. Make your first move Flamessa, give me your best shot.” Remarked Magi as though he was toying with her. Flamessa was too angry, she fired an all mighty energy blast at Magi...

Meanwhile, Tamara was leading Gaia through various twisting and winding long corridors, she thought that they were never going to come to an end. Finally, they came to what appeared to be another stone circle, only it was not a circle of stones exactly but a circle of strange stone statues each of them held a gem stone of some kind. In the centre of this stone circle was a stone ring with many strange symbols on it. Gaia had recognised it, it was the very same one Magi had made appear near in mid air.

Suddenly the ring which was empty and the back of the circle of stone statues could be seen through its centre, suddenly that centre flashed with a green glow, it did not look at all welcoming...
"Is it supposed to look like that?” Asked Queen Gaia looking worried and frightened. “It is safe, please trust me. You and Nyssa must pass through it.” Replied Tamara as though fearing for Gaia's life.
"What is at the other side of this green vortex?”

"I can not say, please you must trust me and do as I say, for the sake of your life and the life to that of your Sissy Son.” Pleaded Tamara, tearfully, Gaia could sense the urgency and sincerity of Tamara's words, she took Nyssa by her hand and stepped through the green vortex. On the other side, there was another woman and another girl, but which was clearly a boy walking towards Gaia and Nyssa, they did not stop, or it seem they could not stop, neither could Gaia and Nyssa they were being as strangely much drawn towards the strange woman and boy as the strange woman and boy were being drawn too, as they got closer, closer, closer and closer to each other, there was an all mighty explosion....

TO BE CONTINUED.....

I LOVE BEING A SISSY BABY PET

'Ask not what you can do for a Sissy. Ask a Sissy what they can do for you.'

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sissydina218

Posted August 11th, 2012 ~ 10:38 pm

alright now it getting really cool, so its the two different worlds crashing into one another all at once? this is really turning out to be a great story keep up the great writing

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