the magic of tokyo's girls school (pg)
here is my first story the consept is based on the sonopsis of an anime i watched and was disipointed with. also watch out for nerdish references.
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here is my first story the consept is based on the sonopsis of an anime i watched and was disipointed with. also watch out for nerdish references. All ideas for addition welcome.

A young boy stood in front of a large pair of wart iron gates. Emblazoned, in sparkling gold, atop the gates read the legend Tokyo area high school of magic for girls. Gripped in the hand of the childs hand was a crumpled letter. The screams, giggles, and other prattling of teenage girls floated over the high wall and settled on the boys ears. Shouldering his backpack, with a deep breath, he strode through the multitude of girls coming to school.

Walking through the gates and to the reception, he got many stares, whispered comment and stifled laughs. Once through the doors he allowed himself to relax. With he meekly walked to the desk excuse me he piped, the receptionist glanced around for a moment, then down with a slight gasp of surprise she ask can I help you, after a double take at they condescending manner of the question, the boy handed the letter to the receptionist. After a few moments of silence hes see you in a moment will you please take a seat informed the receptionist. After a few minutes a tall man walked through from a side door and shoke the boys hand Tanner so nice to meet you at least proclaimed the tall man in a hoity manner. He wore a black suit, his hair was long and black and he had a goatee and his nails where painted black with red pentagrams adored on top. Its a please to meet you too headmaster after getting off an over large, leather armchair, he strode beside the headmaster through the side door and into an office.

It was a cosy room with long drapes that covered the floor to ceiling along one side. Two chairs sat in front of a well scrubbed desk, which took up the most space in the room. The headmaster squeezed behind the desk and sat down. Now you got the letter explaining about the schools wish for you join this magnificent establishment the boy nodded, but then explained Im still in confusion about why me. After a deep calculating look the headmaster sighed I can see youre an intelligent person so why dont you tell me, then I will clear things up. Trying to fathom this last remark the boy voiced the most logical thought that entered his head well, I have been skipped ahead year before and I am thought of as some kind of child protge within the magical community, but that doesnt explain why here at this school, also Im only 10. With a pleased smile on his face the headmaster, lent back in his chair then let on it is true that you are a protge and someone with your abilities should cope well here, no matter your age. As for this school well it is the best school of witchcraft in all the world, no other place has the kind of equipment that we have. Quickly realising that the headmaster had misunderstood him yes, I know that but its a girls school and am most defiantly a boy explained the boy, a chuckle escaped for the headmasters lips thats¦ been accounted for, now Ill show you to your class

Walking in step with the headmaster the boy was silent wondering how his gender had been accounted for until the headmaster cut into his thoughts youve got a tutorial first where everything will be explain. The boy nodded absently. They stopped outside a wholly unremarkable door here it is¦ well good bye and good luck. The boy opened the door, with slight hesitation he entered.

A buzz of voices greeted him as he stepped into the room, there were close to twenty teenage girls sitting around the room, taking very little notice of their surroundings. The only adult in the room was a rather plump, middle-aged women, who was clearly the teacher. Timidly stepping forward, towards the teacher. Excuse me said the boy in a nervous squeak yes¦ oh its you trilled the teacher girls¦girls please be quite I have something to say quiet descended in to the room as quickly as rain fall we have a new student joining us to day, here he is proclaimed the teacher the, in a whisper to the boy well introduce yourself then after nervously swallowing the boy began my name is Tanner Losse, I come England. The silence the had come so quickly, left just as fast. Comments where shouted at Tanner like: but hes a boy! Oo hes so cute, how old are you? Over come with the sudden rush of questions Tanner was silent now girls please be quiet, now there is a matter that Tanner and I must discuses and with that the girls went back to what ever they where doing now Tanner what did the headmaster tell you about armaments for you? Still slightly shocked with his welcome Tanner stuttered o¦o¦only that they had be sorted and you would tell me more about them. A rather forced smile bloomed on the teachers face did he now¦he and I will have words¦well this is a girls school so Im afraid you will have to conform if you get me meaning explained the teacher sweetly, with a look of total comprehension on his face Tanner he mused you want me to become a girl, well aside from some genetalia issues it might work apart from one thing I dont want to be a girl he proclaimed in such a condescending manner that the teacher look affronted well the fact that you dont want to is beside the point but as for your genetalia, this is magic school this last remark was intoned with a complete look of evil on her face it would send the bravest samurai running from her right now.

All the light in the room went out, all Tanner could see were the hands of his teacher as she charged her spell and the eyes which were glowing red. Tanner scurried back against the wall in fear. Then it was released. In a blinding flash left Tanner dazed. Sitting up and rubbing his head, he realised his hair was now long and in pigtails! What was going on though Tanner? He slowly got to his feet and realised his legs where colder than usual. Looking down Tanner realised that he was now wearing a short platted skirt, a pink blouse much like that of the other girls, white frilly socks and a pair of pink Mary-Janes. The teacher was looking down at him now doesnt feel better¦um¦Tina, yes that will do nicely. Still in a stake of shock Tanner, hence forth to be known as Tina, slowly backed off towards the door, which was still a jar. It slammed shut with a flick of the teacher wand. Now little Tina will you be a good girl or will I have to make thing even worse for you? Tina nodded mutely good girl now Ill introduce you to some of you class-mates the teacher stirred Tina towards a small group of girls who were still giggling profusely at Tina situation now this is Akane, Nabeky and Hina the teacher proclaimed, pointing out each one of the girls in turn, they smiled in a warm way. That helped Tina calm down. Taking the seat next Hina, she join the conversation. So Tina where are you staying I havent been given a dorm yet, I was just told it would be sorted replied Tina in a slightly high voice than before hay Akane havent you got a spare bed in your dorm room? Asked Hina in a quite voice that made you think of strict libraries. She wasnt remarkably short or tall; her hair was shoulder length and covered most of her face. Well yeah and I suppose you will probably end up there anyway, I think Im the only one with a free bed lift answered Akane, she was tall, slender the toned look of a diligent athlete. The last girl Nabeky was immersed in a very large, thick book, all that could be of her were two pigtails draping over the front of the book, they were the most vibrant shad of pink in the world . After another half an hour of talk to her new friends and becoming used to her new female self, Tinas lessens for the day began.

Tina flopped onto a small sofa, as soon as she entered the room. It had been a long day, full of new experiences and humiliations. Breath hard she surveyed the room that would be her home for the foreseeable future. It was small but comfortable, a bunk bed dominate one wall, the sofa she was lying on, dominated the back wall up to the door at the far end was a basic kitchen, oven, sink and a small work space . And that was it in the room apart of a little floor space and a window that was it. Within a few minutes Akane walk in¦ Tina¦your skirt, looking down Tina realised that here short skirt was showing practically all of her panties. Covering herself quickly, she asked is it always like today in a small defeated voice. After a few moments of contemplation Akane said in a falsely cheery voice nope¦ quite often its worse a moan of disappointment escaped Tina well there is a way to make it better, I know a spell but It has some effects that you might not like proffered Akane, a look of hope exploded on to Tinas face I dont care just do it she was on her feet now positively bouncing up and down itll take a minute to prepare, just stay here nodding profusely Tina sat down on the sofa again. Within five minutes Akane, Hina, Nabeky walked into the room with evil smiles that filled Tina with dread and fear. Now this wont hurt a bit explained Akane but its best if we hold you down¦ girls if you please still with that smile on her face. Hina and Nabeky quickly removed Tinas skirt and panties, then replacing them with a huge, thick, padded diaper w¦wh¦wha¦what are you doing I dont need those squealed Tina trying desperately to escape her captors. A maniacal laugh bust from all the girls maybe not now but in a few minutes you most certainly will laughed Akane, and then she forced a babys bottle filled with some green liquid into the ten year olds mouth. Unable to stop herself Tina began to suck at the bottle and within a few seconds she had drank it all. Now little baby Tina in that bottle you just drank, that was a potion that will make you walk and talk like a little baby girl and use your diaper just the little whiny baby you are explained Akane. This her last vestiges of maturity slipping from her quickly Tina managed on last word before slipping back into babyhood why? Looking down at the squirming figure before her Akane replied, you asked for this little baby girl but we were planning to do this anyway because you need to earn the right to be a girl now if youre a girl and do what your mummies want we might give the antidote, do you understand still with that look of abject evil on all of there faces, still held down Tina said in a baby voice yeth then she was openly slapped across the face by Hina Akane in a stern voice explained you will address us only as mummy or mummies is that clear. Tears willing up in Tinas eyes she now very scared of her new mummies she replied yeth mummy still in a baby voice with tears coursing down her cheeks there that wasnt so hard was it, ok here are the ground rules: 1, you will do exactly what we say for now on without complaint, got that good, 2, you are a baby from now on and will behave like one, 3, you can under no circumstances use magic, 4, you will not escape or even attempt it. If you brake any of these rules you will be punished serially. Thats it, so well just get you dressed, and you can go to bed.

With that they removed Tinas blouse and replaced it with a pink onesie, then the sofa she had been lying on was turned into a large oversized crib. Now little baby by the morning the process should be complete, so get some sleep. Starting to feel tired Tina settled down to sleep and her new life. The last thought that past thought Tinas mind was what a day first turned into girl, then a baby how can it get worse fabled last words.

The next morning when Tina woke up, she felt odd, groggy, and slightly hung-over which was very strange indeed because normally she hated the taste of alcohol. Shifting around slightly her eyes still tightly shut she realised her clothes felt different, softer, warmer and generally more comfortable, maybe it was just girls clothes thought Tina. Then it all came flooding back¦being turned into a girl, the potion everything. Bolting up right, her eyes flashing bloody murder. Looking quickly scanning the room for anything. Sitting on the bed reading a very large thick book was Hina. Noticing that Tina was up she put the book down and was about to get up but then. Wath the hell havet you done to me screamed Tina from the crib she was sitting in. Hands on hips Hina stood up and curtly replied is that anyway to your mummy now is it baby girl, well I think because of that I wont change you, you can stay there in your filth quelled by the look on Hina face, Tina stopped complaining and became very aware of the mess around her nether regions. Thats better. Lying on her back again, trying to get comfortable with the excrement swirling round her butt. Much later Tina woke up again; she had gone to sleep without realising it. The light streaming through the window was azure and gold it must be near dusk. Akane was in the kitchen cooking something by this time. She was humming and looked very pleased with herself. Turning round to check on Tina, Akane smiled and said, good your awake, well Ive got some supper for you then change you ok nodding approve for this Tina felt very stupid and then prompted by a sudden thought Yeth pease Mummy, her insides squirming from self loathing but trying to look as sweet as possible. Good girl, you see your beginning to enjoy being a baby arent you asked Akane, thinking fast, and knowing the wrong answer could bring down the punishments mentioned the night before Yeth mummy proffered Tina with a unsure hesitation in her voice that was not initially conversing but Akane seemed pleased. After a few bottles of baby food and being changed Tina was left in her crib for a few moments before the trio returned and a chill ran over Tina as if even more horrible things were about to happen. Now every Friday night the all three of us go for a bath together, in suit down stairs, you being a baby we cant possibly leave you all alone can we now explained Akane, the last part of her speak was said with such menace, that Tina began to cry. Hush now wittle baby we wont leave you alone and dont worry well show to all are friends cooed Nabeky, this made Tina cry even harder. After looking hat her friends briefly she continued I think she wants to set off girls, we better get her ready then. Tina still sitting in her crib with nothing on but a diaper, bawling her head off, suddenly stopped and listened a single thought dominated her mind then what fresh horrors have they got for me now. Held in the hands of Hina was a bright pink, little girls bathing costume, Tina was forced in this, the a pair of water wings but mes know how to swim protested Tina in her high shrill baby voice. She was slapped across the face again by Hina again rule 1, you will do exactly what we say for now on without complaint, remember dumbly nodding Tinas weld up with tears again mes sorrye mummy sobbed Tina in a defeated voice. Well lets go then proclaimed Hina.

Lifted out of her crib Tina was promptly dressed and carried to the lift. In the lift Tina started sniffling from fear, what kind of reaction would great her when they entered the bathhouse. Once they enter, to Tina immense relief, it was empty.
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I hope you don't mind, but I am replying with a corrected version for ease of reading.
A young boy stood in front of a large pair of wart iron gates. Emblazoned, in sparkling gold, atop the gates read the legend “Tokyo area high school of magic for girls”. Gripped in the hand of the child’s hand was a crumpled letter. The screams, giggles, and other prattling of teenage girls floated over the high wall and settled on the boys ears. Shouldering his backpack, with a deep breath, he strode through the multitude of girls coming to school.

Walking through the gates and to the reception, he got many stares, whispered comment and stifled laughs. Once through the doors he allowed himself to relax. He meekly walked to the desk “excuse me” he piped, the receptionist glanced around for a moment, then down with a slight gasp of surprise she ask “can I help you,” after a double take at the condescending manner of the question, the boy handed the letter to the receptionist. After a few moments of silence “he’s see you in a moment will you please take a seat” informed the receptionist. After a few minutes a tall man walked through from a side door and shook the boy’s hand “Tanner so nice to meet you at least” proclaimed the tall man in a hoity manner. He wore a black suit, his hair was long and black and he had a goatee and his nails where painted black with red pentagrams adored on top. “It’s a please to meet you too headmaster” after getting off an over large, leather armchair, he strode beside the headmaster through the side door and into an office.

It was a cozy room with long drapes that covered the floor to ceiling along one side. Two chairs sat in front of a well scrubbed desk, which took up the most space in the room. The headmaster squeezed behind the desk and sat down. “Now you got the letter explaining about the schools wish for you join this magnificent establishment” the boy nodded, but then explained “I’m still in confusion about why me”. After a deep calculating look the headmaster sighed “I can see you’re an intelligent person so why don’t you tell me, then I will clear things up”. Trying to fathom this last remark the boy voiced the most logical thought that entered his head “ well, I have been skipped ahead year before and I am thought of as some kind of child protge within the magical community, but that doesn’t explain why here at this school, also I’m only 10”. With a pleased smile on his face the headmaster, lent back in his chair then let on “it is true that you are a protge and someone with your abilities should cope well here, no matter your age. As for this school well it is the best school of witchcraft in all the world, no other place has the kind of equipment that we have”. Quickly realizing that the headmaster had misunderstood him “yes, I know that but it’s a girls school and am most defiantly a boy” explained the boy, a chuckle escaped for the headmasters lips “that’s… been accounted for, now I’ll show you to your class”

Walking in step with the headmaster the boy was silent wondering how his gender had been accounted for until the headmaster cut into his thoughts “you’ve got a tutorial first where everything will be explain”. The boy nodded absently. They stopped outside a wholly unremarkable door “here it is… well good bye and good luck”. The boy opened the door, with slight hesitation he entered.

A buzz of voices greeted him as he stepped into the room, there were close to twenty teenage girls sitting around the room, taking very little notice of their surroundings. The only adult in the room was a rather plump, middle-aged woman, who was clearly the teacher. Timidly stepping forward, towards the teacher; “Excuse me” said the boy in a nervous squeak “yes… oh it’s you” trilled the teacher “girls…girls please be quite I have something to say” quiet descended in to the room as quickly as rain fall “we have a new student joining us today, here he is” proclaimed the teacher then, in a whisper to the boy “well introduce yourself then” after nervously swallowing the boy began “ my name is Tanner Lose, I come England”. The silence they had come so quickly, left just as fast. Comments where shouted at Tanner like: “but he’s a boy”! “Oo he’s so cute”, “how old are you”? Over come with the sudden rush of questions Tanner was silent “now girls please be quiet, now there is a matter that Tanner and I must discuses” and with that the girls went back to whatever they were doing “now Tanner what did the headmaster tell you about armaments for you”? Still slightly shocked with his welcome Tanner stuttered “o…o…only that they had been sorted and you would tell me more about them”. A rather forced smile bloomed on the teachers face “did he now…he and I will have words…well this is a girls school so I’m afraid you will have to conform if you get me meaning” explained the teacher sweetly, with a look of total comprehension on his face Tanner he mused “you want me to become a girl, well aside from some genital issues it might work apart from one thing I don’t want to be a girl” he proclaimed in such a condescending manner that the teacher look affronted “ well the fact that you don’t want to is beside the point but as for your genitalia, this is magic school” this last remark was intoned with a complete look of evil on her face it would send the bravest samurai running from her right now.

All the light in the room went out, all Tanner could see were the hands of his teacher as she charged her spell and the eye’s which were glowing red. Tanner scurried back against the wall in fear. Then it was released. In a blinding flash left Tanner dazed. Sitting up and rubbing his head, he realized his hair was now long and in pigtails! What was going on though Tanner? He slowly got to his feet and realized his legs where colder than usual. Looking down Tanner realized that he was now wearing a short platted skirt, a pink blouse much like that of the other girls, white frilly socks and a pair of pink Mary-Jane’s. The teacher was looking down at him “now doesn’t feel better…um…Tina, yes that will do nicely”. Still in a stake of shock Tanner, hence forth to be known as Tina, slowly backed off towards the door, which was still a jar. It slammed shut with a flick of the teacher wand. “Now little Tina will you be a good girl or will I have to make thing even worse for you”? Tina nodded mutely “good girl now I’ll introduce you to some of you class-mates” the teacher stirred Tina towards a small group of girls who were still giggling profusely at Tina situation “now this is Akane, Nabeky and Hina” the teacher proclaimed, pointing out each one of the girls in turn, they smiled in a warm way. That helped Tina calm down. Taking the seat next Hina, she join the conversation. “So Tina where are you staying” “I haven’t been given a dorm yet, I was just told it would be sorted” replied Tina in a slightly high voice than before “hay Akane haven’t you got a spare bed in your dorm room”? Asked Hina in a quiet voice that made you think of strict libraries. She wasn’t remarkably short or tall; her hair was shoulder length and covered most of her face. “Well yeah and I suppose you will probably end up there anyway, I think I’m the only one with a free bed lift” answered Akane, she was tall, slender the toned look of a diligent athlete. The last girl Nabeky was immersed in a very large, thick book, all that could be of her were two pigtails draping over the front of the book, they were the most vibrant shad of pink in the world . After another half an hour of talk to her new friends and becoming used to her new female self, Tina’s lessens for the day began.

Tina flopped onto a small sofa, as soon as she entered the room. It had been a long day, full of new experiences and humiliations. Breath hard she surveyed the room that would be her home for the foreseeable future. It was small but comfortable, a bunk bed dominate one wall, the sofa she was lying on, dominated the back wall up to the door at the far end was a basic kitchen, oven, sink and a small work space . And that was it in the room apart of a little floor space and a window that was it. Within a few minutes Akane walk in… “Tina…your skirt”, looking down Tina realized that here short skirt was showing practically all of her panties. Covering herself quickly, she asked “is it always like today” in a small defeated voice. After a few moments of contemplation Akane said in a falsely cheery voice “nope… quite often it’s worse” a moan of disappointment escaped Tina “well there is a way to make it better, I know a spell but It has some effects that you might not like” proffered Akane, a look of hope exploded on to Tina’s face “I don’t care just do it” she was on her feet now positively bouncing up and down “it’ll take a minute to prepare, just stay here” nodding profusely Tina sat down on the sofa again. Within five minutes Akane, Hina, Nabeky walked into the room with evil smiles that filled Tina with dread and fear. “Now this won’t hurt a bit” explained Akane “but it’s best if we hold you down… girls if you please” still with that smile on her face. Hina and Nabeky quickly removed Tina’s skirt and panties, then replacing them with a huge, thick, padded diaper “w…wh…wha…what are you doing I don’t need those” squealed Tina trying desperately to escape her captors. A maniacal laugh bust from all the girls “maybe not now but in a few minutes you most certainly will” laughed Akane, and then she forced a baby’s bottle filled with some green liquid into the ten year olds mouth. Unable to stop herself Tina began to suck at the bottle and within a few seconds she had drank it all. “Now little baby Tina in that bottle you just drank, that was a potion that will make you walk and talk like a little baby girl and use your diaper just the little whiny baby you are” explained Akane. This her last vestiges of maturity slipping from her quickly Tina managed on last word before slipping back into babyhood “why”? Looking down at the squirming figure before her Akane replied, “you asked for this little baby girl but we were planning to do this anyway because you need to earn the right to be a girl now if you’re a girl and do what your mummies want we might give the antidote, do you understand” still with that look of abject evil on all of their faces, still held down Tina said in a baby voice “yeth” then she was openly slapped across the face by Hina Akane in a stern voice explained “you will address us only as mummy or mummies is that clear”. Tears willing up in Tina’s eyes she now very scared of her new “mummies” she replied “yeth mummy” still in a baby voice with tears coursing down her cheeks “there that wasn’t so hard was it, ok here are the ground rules: 1, you will do exactly what we say for now on without complaint, got that good, 2, you are a baby from now on and will behave like one, 3, you can under no circumstances use magic, 4, you will not escape or even attempt it. If you break any of these rules you will be punished serially. That’s it, so we’ll just get you dressed, and you can go to bed.

With that they removed Tina’s blouse and replaced it with a pink onesie, then the sofa she had been lying on was turned into a large oversized crib. “Now little baby by the morning the process should be complete, so get some sleep”. Starting to feel tired Tina settled down to sleep and her new life. The last thought that past thought Tina’s mind was “what a day first turned into girl, then a baby how can it get worse” fabled last words.

The next morning when Tina woke up, she felt odd, groggy, and slightly hung-over which was very strange indeed because normally she hated the taste of alcohol. Shifting around slightly her eyes still tightly shut she realized her clothes felt different, softer, warmer and generally more comfortable, maybe it was just girls clothes thought Tina. Then it all came flooding back…being turned into a girl, the potion everything. Bolting up right, her eyes flashing bloody murder. Looking quickly scanning the room for anything. Sitting on the bed reading a very large thick book was Hina. Noticing that Tina was up she put the book down and was about to get up but then. “What the hell have you done to me” screamed Tina from the crib she was sitting in. Hands on hips Hina stood up and curtly replied “is that anyway to your mummy now is it baby girl, well I think because of that I won’t change you, you can stay there in your filth” quelled by the look on Hina face, Tina stopped complaining and became very aware of the mess around her nether regions. “That’s better”. Lying on her back again, trying to get comfortable with the excrement swirling round her butt. Much later Tina woke up again; she had gone to sleep without realizing it. The light streaming through the window was azure and gold it must be near dusk. Akane was in the kitchen cooking something by this time. She was humming and looked very pleased with herself. Turning round to check on Tina, Akane smiled and said, “good your awake, well I’ve got some supper for you then change you ok” nodding approve for this Tina felt very stupid and then prompted by a sudden thought “Yeth pease Mummy”, her insides squirming from self loathing but trying to look as sweet as possible. “Good girl, you see your beginning to enjoy being a baby isn’t you” asked Akane, thinking fast, and knowing the wrong answer could bring down the punishments mentioned the night before “Yeth mummy” proffered Tina with an unsure hesitation in her voice that was not initially conversing but Akane seemed pleased. After a few bottles of baby food and being changed Tina was left in her crib for a few moments before the trio returned and a chill ran over Tina as if even more horrible things were about to happen. “Now every Friday night the all three of us go for a bath together, in suit down stairs, you being a baby we can’t possibly leave you all alone can we now” explained Akane, the last part of her speak was said with such menace, that Tina began to cry. “Hush now wittle baby we won’t leave you alone and don’t worry we’ll show to all are friends” cooed Nabeky, this made Tina cry even harder. After looking at her friends briefly she continued “I think she wants to set off girls, we better get her ready then”. Tina still sitting in her crib with nothing on but a diaper, bawling her head off, suddenly stopped and listened a single thought dominated her mind then “what fresh horrors have they got for me now”. Held in the hands of Hina was a bright pink, little girls bathing costume, Tina was forced in this, a pair of water wings “but me’s know how to swim” protested Tina in her high shrill baby voice. She was slapped across the face again by Hina again “rule 1, you will do exactly what we say for now on without complaint, remember” dumbly nodding Tina’s weld up with tears again “me’s sorry mummy” sobbed Tina in a defeated voice. “Well let’s go then” proclaimed Hina.

Lifted out of her crib Tina was promptly dressed and carried to the lift. In the lift Tina started sniffling from fear, what kind of reaction would great her when they entered the bathhouse. Once they enter, to Tina immense relief, it was empty.
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Nice story its quite...inspiring.
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Dani Rose
loved it so uber cute
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Lil_miss_stacy
Absolutely loved it :)
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Shadowstar
very interestign idea i like it is the going to ever be more?
they say beuty is in the eye of the beholder but there is no reason why it cant be wrong
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tina101
was the anime by any chance called Negima! please let me know if I am right.
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Enosh
Actually this isn't bad. You should consider continuing it. I love the anime/school setting and the concepts here could lend themselves to some really fun side stories...
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kah91
Wow I'd completely forgotten this was here, thank you all for the praise you're being far to kind and yes tina101 the anime I was shamelessly ripping off was negima. To be honest I think this does need to be rewritten in a complete form there is a lot of scope for improvements, so no promises but I will endeavour to provide an end and hopefully a better beginning and middle to this story.
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