The Imp (PG)
An imp goes too far with a bit of mischief and then gets the surprise of his life after soiling a little girls favirite teddy bear
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The Imp 


Part 1: Mischief
A tiny winged creature was flying through the dark streets of a small sleepy town of Galway. It is just past midnight. The little creatures is looking for a place to cause trouble, strife and mischief in. He finds a perfect house and he detects a great deal of power there, however he dismisses it when he comes to the open upstairs window and finds only a little girl sleeping in a very pink room with cute soft toys on some shelves. Above the girls bed was also a dream catcher. On the end of the girls bed was a lovingly engraved name Bethany. He sees the first thing he can cause mischief with. There is a bowl of cold water on the side of the girls bedside table her hand is hanging outside the bed, the Imp picked her unresisting hand up and put it into the cold water and within seconds he hears a rushing sound and sees wetness creep along the sheets.
He then decides to throw her teddies all around the room and rub a couple in the wetness on the sheets.

The imp decided t o go to sleep then knowing he had done enough mischief for one night and curled up on some soft clothes on the floor he was content. If only he knew what was awaiting him when he got found and Bethany realized he was the one who made her wet the bed and threw her favourite teddy around and rubbed it in her pee. You see readers that little girl Bethany was a witch just like her whole family are…


Part 2: consequences
Bethany woke up to find her quilt and sheets that were clean on last night were wet and she felt cold around her crotch.
She knew she had wet the bed but what she didn’t know was why she hadn’t wet the bed for about 3 years.
Once she rubbed the sleep out of her eyes she realised that one hand was colder then the other s, so she knew what the cause of her accident was. Also her teddies were everywhere, finally she saw he favourite teddy that was a small fluffy pink one with a diaper on soaking wet and smelling of pee. The young girl was furious and was about to shout for her sisters then she realised her sisters would never do what has been done then she catches sight of the ugly, scaly, red creature curled up on her school uniform and immediately knew who the culprit was.
She picked him up by his legs and shook him awake.
“Why you slimy, disgusting creature, You put my hand In the cold water by my made and made me soil my new sheets ,you threw my teddies everywhere , you sleep on my school uniform and then to top it all you rub my favritie teddy im my pee. You are gonna have to be punished for this you scaly little rat.”

The imp smiles showing lots of sharp teeth in an almost cute smile with his big green eyes. He talks in a very high pitched voice

“*giggles* you no gonna hurt poor Benjy are you?, Me only doing what benjy does best bedsides what can you do to Benjy. Me is imp, me have magik. What you have.*spiteful laughter*”

With that her spits black slime at Bethany’s face forcing her to drop him then he is up flying and cackling. She soon wipes the slime and screams “what do I have? Petrificous totalus im a witch, what do you think I have. After saying the words a jet of green light shot form her fingers and caught the imp square in the chest and h drops like a stone. Bethany then gets one of her dolly’s diapers and puts it on the petrified imp and then puts a bonnet on his head. Then gets another dollies dress and puts it on the little creature. Then unparislis him and when the “Baby” wakes up she says to him “from now one you’re going to be my little baby girl toy and later I might introduce you to my sisters.”
The imp was terrified so much so he involuntarily wets his diaper. He knows he will never again be able to make
mischief and especially not for witches And the distruaght Benjy the Imp becomes Becky the Baby Doll.

Part3: family
So Bethany took her little imp sissy baby doll down to see her family telling them with great glee "look at my new dolly mummy, lexi isn’t she cute."
Bethany’s mum Marian answers knowing full well that the little creature is an imp having dealt with them before.
"Err Huni do you know what that is?"
"Yes mummy it’s a little rat with wings that made me wet the bed and soiled my favourite teddy I thought he deserved punishment."
Lexi, Bethany’s big sister comes down and immediately goes up to the "Baby" and coos and tickles it ,the imp doesn’t like this, "she" tries to claw Lexis eyes out then lexi actually spanks "Her"


"No,*spank*no*spank*no*Spank* Bad baby you need a widdle time out *spank* you*spank* nasty,*spank* Evil*spank spank* little demon*SPANK!*"


After this the imp is howling and crying and very wet. Miarina lets her girls get on with puinisheg the imp beacasue its clear they can handle him and bethnay said he made her wet the bed and spoiled herfaivirite teddy so she aggred with thepunishet cos wet sheets meant extra wasshing.
So she goes out to sort out breackfast
"Benjy sowwy*Sobs*, Benjy be good lil imp, no more pain for Benjy pwese."
Bethany decided to make "Her" remember "Her proper name...

Bethany shouts:
"Your very bad baby girl Becky using your old boys name your name is not Benjy any more and it never has benjy you were always Becky you were always my Baby Doll.

With that both Lexi and Bethany cast a spell that lead Benjy the Imp to think of himself as Becky the Baby Girl and suddenly the wet mess in his diaper became kind of pleasant for him but there was more torment in store for him yet The Hollenbeck sisters had not yet come close to finishing the Evil little imps punishment but they had to be fair and didn’t want her getting diaper rash so they changed her diaper lovingly so she was all clean and fresh.

Once the girls had finished with Becky she would be helplessly using her diapers for everything with a bit of suggestion and training and the Hollenbeck sisters would have their very own Baby Doll to play with...


part 4: training!
So they Hollenbeck daughters begin training their sissy baby imp.
They create some special music that is full of magical subliminal suggestion that they will play over the imps crib. They get all their baby girl cloths together in one place ready for the transformation, they also make potion wit h more nefarious purposes, the two girls are giggling with glee after they finished setting up the “Baby” nursery in Bethany’s room.
Everything was in place. they put Becky to bed in her cute babies crib then they turned on the

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Andreea
Ah! So we're in the Harry Potter universe, then (or some nearby parallel dimension, at any rate)? Nice idea, to actually have some poetic justice in the theme - especially for me, as I would only be able to experience AB as a form of punishment in any case. This could bear the addition of another chapter, though, to expand upon the imp's humiliations... if you're feeling sadistic enough. ;)
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Miki Yamuri
Ahhh ... yes, as Andreea says, Harry Potter Universe, take a left before you get to Diadod Alley and watch out for the Nargles. **giggle**

I like it alot. It is the perfect punishment for the Imp. I feel everyone should have 4 or 5 imp babydolls in diapers just to humiliate them.

Is a great story and hope to see more of this.

Keep up the good work.


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Shadowstar


 Ah! So we're in the Harry Potter universe, then (or some nearby parallel dimension, at any rate)? Nice idea, to actually have some poetic justice in the theme - especially for me, as I would only be able to experience AB as a form of punishment in any case. This could bear the addition of another chapter, though, to expand upon the imp's humiliations... if you're feeling sadistic enough. ;)  




i wil lad the next part then and post it after a bit of feedback
and itsnot realyl sadistic the imp ws cause ing trouble in the first place but dam right im feleig nsadistic enough i was hopeing for a new chapter request. perhps we could be in harry potter world wewhere d yo uregognise te chracterfrom?
also idecided id make behtn ydiffernt i.e sher dont need dieprs in thsione but its essentially the same one as in the chosen one
they say beuty is in the eye of the beholder but there is no reason why it cant be wrong
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Shadowstar
yo usee i know yo ud liek this one amy cos yo ulove ab/fem il ladd more if yo uwant it do you?

also lets rember not everyone cn subdue a nimp with 2 words not everyone is magik. Aslo imps are mischiefious and unpleasnt but they areonot evil how ever they are stupind e.g sleeping in plain sight of the one he tormented ithought that was funny
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sissybabydragon
mz wov it sis mz wan't to wead more
A life in diapers is life without worry's
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Shadowstar
more is coming huni dotn worry
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baby5522
Oh Shadowstat this stowy iseths the cutest babyfied stowy me haseths ever wead, it's short, but its full of wonderful cuteness and wonderful words that you are so wery good at using, fwo a short stowy, it waseths epic in the mastery, if you permit me to say that? Mastery of your outstanding quality of writing, absolutely wonderful, honest.

Baby Amy.

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 Oh Shadowstat this stowy iseths the cutest babyfied stowy me haseths ever wead, it's short, but its full of wonderful cuteness and wonderful words that you are so wery good at using, fwo a short stowy, it waseths epic in the mastery, if you permit me to say that? Mastery of your outstanding quality of writing, absolutely wonderful, honest.

Baby Amy.  



is it really the best baby/fem story yo uever read idont want yo uto say that unless its true amy, if yo udont like anyof it yo ucna say you knowi wont be mad.
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Andreea
Re: chapter 3. Good implementation of the generic DL punishment theme in a magical context, but the "agonising cramps" were a little jarring, and make it a bit harder to sympathise with Bethany (She seems, at this point, all too adept at torture for a supposedly white witch). Or possibly you wanted to darken her a bit, in which case forget I even raised the point (though I would, at any rate, consider how her mother should react to this scene. She seems to exit midway).
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Shadowstar
perhaps she is awhitewhithc so il lahve to gut that part out and il lact on mumsreaction or maybe ai shold darken behtn yalittle ideas ideas
greatly appreicate that feed back andreea
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im not into evil i think il lgetrid of that
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Jennifer Funshine
Neat little stories Shadowstar :) I don't know a lot about the Harry Potter
Universe every ones is referencing but rest assured The Imp is deserving of its designation.
Just curious if The Imp has any friends, perhaps someone that will notice he is missing?
I hope to see some development there, as I know much about Bethany and her family
from your previous stories. Also was wondering in what era does this take place in?
Sorry if I hunger for details that may be irrelevant, just curious is all.
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Shadowstar


 Neat little stories Shadowstar :) I don't know a lot about the Harry Potter
Universe every ones is referencing but rest assured The Imp is deserving of its designation.
Just curious if The Imp has any friends, perhaps someone that will notice he is missing?
I hope to see some development there, as I know much about Bethany and her family
from your previous stories. Also was wondering in what era does this take place in?
Sorry if I hunger for details that may be irrelevant, just curious is all.  




not irrelivantt atall sis jaust curious but you know waht they say curiosit ykilled the catfish
it tkaespalce in modern times waht gave you the idea it was otherwise jsut curiosu?
i think the imp does have friends well parents actully that are bigger and stronger and they are missign their son/daughter os i expect they wi llcome ot get him/her bakc at somepoint yo umust teply soon if ya can i would like to hear your thoughts
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natawishsissy
haha wonderful i love it you have a great knowledge of mythology great short
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Shadowstar
il ladd more whne i have the time it seems to be really quite popular
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Andreea
My sympathies are all with the imps, I'm afraid.   I was glad to get two chapters from their focus, and see that they have some sort of society and are not just random, solitary mythical beings. I assume it is quite a primitive society, though: they seem to scavenge supplies and rely mainly on brute force - since the unintelligent but stronger men are in charge - although the spell breakers sound quite advanced. Are those devices or counter-spells?

I eagerly await the resolution to Part 7.  
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Shadowstar
they are devices and graln runs the show cos he is their father he is als thebiggest and most powerfull
and my intention was to slure the withces anyway. i decided the witches were always to good so this time i slured them

part 7 is up with part 6
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Sarah Candy Lee
  i like where this is going how much more do u thnik there will be to go
i should probably write something really profound =)
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Shadowstar
possibly two more chpters sister maybe three but not many more. or ill kepe wrtinmgi till i run out of ideas for it.
they say beuty is in the eye of the beholder but there is no reason why it cant be wrong
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Andreea
I approve of this development, as I never had much time for these witches. I do hope that the imps can devise a pleasingly ironic strategy to teach them the error of their ways ...  
"When you adopt the standards and the values of someone else or a community or a pressure group, you surrender your own integrity. You become, to the extent of your surrender, less of a human being." (Eleanor Roosevelt)
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Shadowstar
dont worry bout that my freind i have it all planed
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prissyprincess
  I loved your story . Keep them coming I can wait. You,ve moved me to the darker side of the bed dear.  
May the Fun never END . giggles , Summer,s Hot How About You ,
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Shadowstar
i ahve other storys pricy if you liked this one , chek thehollenbeck sisters,and anthonys humilation. and if yo uwant a long read there the rowne family.
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prissyprincess
  oooooh!! shadow star you make me all wet inside . I just love the way you put pen to paper yes its true  love is in the air . spread the word, 
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yo uread the others? and yes please do spread the word aobut my stuff if oy ulike it
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