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DESTINATION UNKNOWN

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Amy Sadler

© 2017

 

Author’s Notes:

 

This story is a complete work of fiction, all characters and place names are all fictional. Any similarities to any real cities, or people alive or dead, is purely coincidental. The opening of this story features a group of people that end up walking along a disused railway track, this is solely for the purpose of this work of fiction. I do not endorse, nor would I encourage such an activity for anyone to do. It would be unsafe and unwise to attempt to do anything of this nature. This story contains mild Sissy Themes, all characters are of 18 years and over. 

 

 

The Mysterious Train

 

There once was 4 people, their names were: John, Tina, Daisy and Roy. John was the oldest of them all, he was 20 years old, Tina was 19, Daisy and Roy were both 18. They were, the best of friends, they all had gone to the same school as each other, they had remained friends after leaving school, John being the oldest was obviously the first to leave St Helen’s School, it was the best school of the entire city itself. St Helens was a city and yet at the same time a rural close knit community, it had a mix of city blocks and rural houses. It was also half countryside area and half concrete jungle, as the saying goes.

     

St Helen’s was unique by design, it had the best of both and that is what made it quite a popular place for many outside of it to want to go and live there and for its residence to stay there. The city had plenty to offer, there was a fair share of local shops and multiplex stores. St Helen’s had a

well-balanced population, it was on the whole not too large, but not too small either. There was a river that cut right through the city itself and there was a local ferry service for public transportation to help people get across the river to the other side, while traffic went over two bridges, one on either end of the river.

 

John, was 6ft tall, he had hazel brown eyes and dark brown hair, he was of medium build. Tina was 5ft 6in tall, she had long red hair, cat green eyes, she was of Irish origins and she had a slender build. Daisy was 5ft 5 in tall, she had short black hair and icy clue eyes, she was of medium build. Lastly, Roy, he was 5ft 4in tall, he had dark brown hair and baby blue eyes. He was of slim build.

 

They were all out on a walk in the countryside of St Helen’s. With big green open fields, lots of farms, trees even a few forests here and there, the sun was high up in the sky, but it was not too hot, there was a mild summer breeze that kept the temperature on the right side of being cool enough, but not too cold. There was a bypass in the distance, from where they were walking, John suddenly stopped for a moment to look at something else that was in the distance too.

 

“Say… What are you looking at?” Asked Tina, who noticed that John had come to a sudden halt and seemed to be staring at something. “If I am not mistaken, there seems to be a rail track just up ahead from where I am standing.” Tina looked shocked, puzzled and surprised at the same time. “What? Are you serious?”

“Of course I am.”

“That can’t be. In all the time we have lived here, there’s never ever been a railway station. The only way in and out of St Helen’s is by car or coach. St Helen’s is the only city not to have an actual train station.”     

 

“Yeah. I know that Daisy. That said, I definitely can see a rail track, none the less.”

“What? Are you sure?””

“Of course I am sure Roy. I would not make up something like this. Besides, look for your selves, all of you.” Tina, Daisy and Roy all looked to where John was looking. Sure enough, a track with sleepers could just about bee seen, just barely. “I don’t believe it!” Remarked Roy in alarm.

 

“We see it too and we definitely can’t believe it.” Replied both Tina and Daisy at the same time as each other. “Come on, let’s take a closer look.”

“Too right we will.” Remarked both Tina and Daisy. “The same goes for me too.” Remarked Roy in curious wonder. John began to lead the way, they followed him until at long last, out in the open filed, dead middle of nowhere really, stretching for as long as the eye could see, was a solitary rail track, but what did this mean?

 

“I don’t get it!” Remarked John in shock, as he took a map out of his back pack, Tina, Daisy and Roy had a back pack each. It’s not even marked on my map!”

“What? Here… let me look at that.” Remarked Tina, sounding quite sceptical of John’s claim. Gosh… John… You’re right, it isn’t.”

“Say can I look at that map?” Asked Daisy who equally seemed very sceptical of this odd piece of news. “Me too please after Daisy has had a look at it. I have to see it for myself.”

 

They all looked at the map very carefully and true enough, according to the map, the rail track that was before them should not be there. “Is this map correct?”

“Of course it is Daisy. I wouldn’t be using it if it wasn’t.”

“It could be a misprint.”

“Not really Roy, but I can see how you might come to that conclusion, it was mine to, but the city maps have always been accurate.”

“Then how do you explain the rail track as large as life, being here then?”

     

“To be perfectly honest with you Roy. I can’t. By all rights this rail track should not be here. Yet clearly it is.”

“I don’t get it. Why hide the fact that there is an actual rail system here?”

“Well… the rail track is here and real for sure…” Remarked John, then he walked up to it and stepped right onto it, just to make sure that it was for real. It was, Tina, Daisy and Roy joined him on the track.

 

“But that is not to say there is a complete rail way system.”

“I can’t see how there could or would not be so. As it would not make sense to just have the one rail way track, would it?” Asked Tina trying to make sense of this new found discovery, that was a bit of a mystery. “You do have a point there Tina.”

“Do you think that this railway track will eventually lead to a railway station?”

“I should imagine it would do so Daisy.”

“Say, maybe we should follow the rail track and see if that is exactly so.”

 

Remarked Roy in excitement. This was a discovery of a life time and a mystery well worth investigating. Usually their walks in the countryside, while they were nice and interesting, they were not exactly exciting, since they all knew the ins and outs of the city, every single area of it, or so they thought. “That would not be a good idea” Remarked John in a stern tone of voice. “Why not?” Asked Tina, curious to why John was against Roy’s suggestion. “Yeah John. Why, why not?”

“I thought that was obvious. It’s completely illegal to walk along a rail track, not to mention other dangers involved in doing so.”

 

“I can’t see how this track could be in use, it looks to be completely deserted.”

“At the moment it is. But that is not to say that there is not a train that might come along it at any moment.”

“Are you serious? John, that’s silly, we all know there’s never ever been a rail system here, so this can’t be in use.”

“I normally would agree with you there Tina. But with not really knowing how or why this is here, how can we know for sure that this is not in use?”

  

“Sorry to be pointing out the obvious thing here John, we have never heard or seen a train in St Helen’s, for all of the time we have been living here. Besides, I have just realised something. Something quite disturbing in fact and you’re not going to like it.”

“What is that Daisy?”

“Yes what is it Daisy? Do tell us.” Remarked Tina and Roy in excited curiosity. “We have all been this way more than once before and this rail track had not been here on any of those occasions.”

“What?” Gasped John, Tina and Roy all together at the same time as each other.

 

“Come on you guys…  Think!!!!” Remarked Daisy in a completely serious tone of voice. This area is our most favourite spot. We come by this way all the time, every Sunday. Now then, in all of that time, this railway track has never been here. So how comes it is here now?” John, Tina and Roy all looked at each other, then back at Daisy, their faces had turn dead pale white, the same shade that Daisy’s face too had turned. “Oh my god… Daisy, you’re right.”

 

“Then.. this really should not be here at all.” Remarked Tina in a state of frightened shock and disbelief. “Just what is going on here?” Asked John in alarm. “I think I have an answer.” Remarked Roy all of sudden, everyone turned to face him. “Go on. We’re listening.” Replied John, Tina and Daisy in unison. “We must have gone back in time somehow.” Just then John, Tina and Daisy burst out laughing. “Don’t be silly Roy, I know that you like your science fiction, but we all know pretty well the history of St Helen’s. While true, like any city, it has changed over time in places. But it’s one remaining constant has been the fact that it has never had a rail way network, it’s what makes the city so unique in that regard.”

 

Replied John, almost sounding like a history buff. “Oh yeah.” Remarked Roy, feeling really stupid. “Something is not right about this being here.” Said Tina, with an uneasy feeling in the pit of her stomach. “I’m with Tina on that one. I mean how can something like this not be here and then all of a sudden be here like this?”

“I wish I knew Daisy.”

“The only best way then is for us to do what I had suggested earlier. We follow this track and see if it will actually lead us to a train station, hopefully we may find some answers there.”

 

Everyone all looked at Roy, who did not seem to be all that foolish after all. “He’s right. We could debate this into the long hours of the day and be no closer to finding out what is going on here. I second Roy’s suggestion.”

“I’m with you too Daisy.” John did not look at all to be so sure, Tina, Daisy and Roy gave him a long hard stare. “Alright… Alright, We will go with Roy’s suggestion.” Remarked John, not really happy about the prospect of walking along a rail way track, even if it were not in use.

 

Everyone waited for Roy, it was his idea, so it only seemed natural that he lead the way. He was only too happy to do so. They all began to walk along in single file Roy first, then Daisy, Tina and lastly John. They walked toward the bypass, in which the track seem to be taking them, it went underneath it, on they went, walking a good long distance until a sound made Roy nearly almost freeze on the spot. “No.. not possible…”

 

“What’s up Roy?” Asked everyone. “No time to explain… Jump!” Remarked Roy, as he almost squealed like a girl in doing so. But as amusing as that seemed to be, all of a sudden, Roy leaped for his life, right off the rail track. Daisy, Tina and John followed suit. They all hit the ground… hard… Lucky for them the field was thick with lots of grass and it mostly cushioned their fall.

 

Remarked John in a breath of a shocked gasp. “I never even heard it coming.” Remarked Tina trebling as she said that. “Me neither.” Replied Daisy who was also quite shaken up by the train appearing like that, as if from out of nowhere. “Wait… why is it stopping?” Remarked Roy in confusion. “It nearly hit us, that’s why.” Replied Daisy sounding a little cross, thinking that the answer to be quite obvious. The train had come to a complete halt. John was ready to face an angry train driver.

 

“Say… what’s taking so long?” Remarked Tina, looking down the rail track to where the train itself had stopped. The train driver had not gotten off the train. “I was wondering the same thing myself Tina. What is taking the train driver so long?”

“Is he stupid or what?” Asked Daisy, not seeming to be at all, all too impressed. “I don’t think anyone is coming out to tell us all off. Maybe that’s a good sign.” Remarked Roy. Who simply wanted now for everyone to simply get off the rail track and as far away from that train, as possible.

“In that case. I vote that we all get off this rail track and start to head back to our homes. It’s starting to get late. Our parents will be wondering about us about right now.” Replied John, he, Tina Daisy and Roy were still living with their parents, but that was not at all at least odd, that was pretty much the norm in St Helen’s, most children did not leave home until at least in their early 30’s or so. Some move out in their late 20’s. Over all though, most were happy to stay and live with their parents even at the age of 20 to the age 23, at least.

 

“We agree.” Replied Tina, Daisy and Roy, it was unanimous, that they got back home, maybe even to put this mystery behind them. “Hey.. what’s going on… I… I can’t move…” Cried out Roy in shear distress, as he tried to make a run for it. As so did Daisy, Tina and John. Both Tina and Daisy also looked to be alarmed. “We can’t seem to move either.”

“This is silly, our mind’s must be playing tricks on us. We should be able to move.” Remarked John in total dismay that he could no move too. “Why can’t we move?” Tina and surprisingly Roy both screamed.

 

“I don’t know.” Replied John. The sound of the train began to start up. “Now what?” Remarked Daisy, sounding quite annoyed. The train began to set off, only it seem to be coming in their direction. “What the!!!!” Exclaimed John in shock. The train soon reached them and then it suddenly stopped, it’s doors suddenly opened. “I don’t like the look of this…”

“Me neither Tina.”

 

“If I did not know any better, I would swear that this train seems as though it wants us all to get on it.”

“That’s silly.”

“I’m sorry Roy. But Daisy could be right, As crazy as it may seem. It does look as though we are expected to get onto this train.”

“I don’t think we should. It has to be a trap.”

“I agree with you Roy. But we are all unable to move.”     


“I have a very bad feeling that the only direction we are going to be able to move in… Is onto this train. Since I’m the eldest. I will try that theory…”

“No….” Tina, Daisy and Roy shouted out in alarm.. But it was too late… John had leaped right onto the train… Fearing that the mysterious train would take off of, with him on it. But that did not happen. “I think that pretty much has proven my point. It seems you have no choice but to hop on too.”

 

Replied John standing up inside of the train, just nearby the door. Tina, Daisy and Roy looked up at him in shock and horror. Knowing that he was right, they got onto the train, one by one. Once Roy had stepped on, the train doors closed immediately behind him and then the train suddenly took off at top speed. “We may as well sit down. I have no idea where this train taking us, but we have no choice but to go along with the ride.” Tina, Daisy and Roy nodded their heads, as they went to sit down, dreading of where exactly the train was taking them, and that was the most frightening thing of all, was not knowing, but more so as to what will happen once they finally do arrive at their destination?

 

TO BE CONTINUED….

 

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Baby Butch
Interesting story you have written, it appears to be a mystery story. Hope to find out where this mysterious train is taking everyone and why. I like the story so far!
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SissyBabyPet
@ Baby Butch

  Thank you Baby Butch. I am glad that you like the story, yes it is a bit of a mystery with some sci-fi elements. The sissy themes come later on, but I won't say when or where, as not to spoil the story for you.

 
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sissybabysamantha2
A very interesting and unusual train I am looking forward to more     
 
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SissyBabyPet
@ sissybabysamantha2

  Sissybabysamantha2 for the comment, it is very much appreciated. I am glad that you like the story and looking forward to the next installment.

 
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lil sissie
 Now mes in suspence can't wait to read more
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SissyBabyPet
@ lil sissie

  Thank you for the coment lil sissie. I hope you can wait just a little more longer? I have just recently gotten back my new computer that I bought some time ago and there was a problem with the power button. That has recently been fixed and I am currently sorting things out on my new computer. My other computer has faulty USB ports both front and back, sometimes they would work, and then not work, on and off, which made making the use of that computer, virtually almost impossible to use.

I could have had that computer fixed, but it really was not ideal for a particular PC Game that I have always wanted to have and play, because the expansion version of the game is sadly not available for any of the consoles. PS3, XBOX 360, etc. Plus it's a difficult game to get hold of, thanks to my room mate, he managed to find me a copy of this game in very good condtion. Most others of the few that were avaialbe were in used condition and those may have sctratches, game discs with scratches are known to have problems, from what I know about.

Anyway, long story short, I bought the only copy of the game to be in very good condition and I will be getting help to have it installed on my new computer that is ideal for being able to play the game on it. The new computer is a Quad Core HP Pavillion, with lots of cool features on it. The only real problem with it, was the power button. If the seller is to be believed, the computer had cost him or her £300. They sold it on Ebay for £80. That's a real bargin. I'll be posting chapter 2 tomorrow, by then I will have everything all sorted out on my new computer.
 
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Sarah Marina
The build-up is exciting, Amy. You really bring the characters to life with your descriptive writing.

Have you ever tried writing "interactive fiction?"  (e.g. games like Zork, Adventure, or Diaper Quest)?

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Sarah
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SissyBabyPet
@ Sarah Marina

  Thank you Sarah Marina for the coment and compliment. If you mean stories that gives the reader choices to make should a character say continue or refuse to go in a certain direction and is descision made brings about different consequencves. Do you mean that sort of thing? If so, then yes, I did try to atempt to do something like that, but I struggled to come up with different things that would haapen by chosing a different line of action to the actual one the reader is suppost to take, but does not know that until they make the right choice.

While I do have a very creative mind, I think it is safe to say that interactive stories require a lot more than just imagination. An extra special kind of creativeness would be needed for something like that and more. I am able to make places and charactes seem so real, because in my imagination that is exactly how everything appears to be. I have said this many times before, that for me, when an idea etc. comes to me, it's like having a live action movie if you will that plays out in my mind, everything is there, the characters, the scenary, etc. Most stories virtually write themselves, if you know what I mean? Only when I fall short of imagination, do I need to go over what I have already written and work out what is going to happen next, etc.

I very rarely change a character or idea direction, unless I feel a change is needed. I consider myself truly so very lucky to have the kind of imagination that I have, though it is not entirely unique. A very famous person shares a similar imagination to which he wrote and produced his own sci fi show based upon. J. Michael Straczynski (Creator of Babylon 5 & Cursade) In one of the interviews of the series box set that I have on DVD. He talks about how the characters appeared in his imagination etc. And he reveals that he saw everything all play out like a movie in his head etc. Actually, I consider myself humbly honoured to share a similar imaginative mind, to someone of J. Michael Starczynski's creativeness.

 
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Sarah Marina
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Yes, a story with player choices is what I meant. And I totally understand why it's hard to come up with alternate story scenarios, especially with the subject matter that we all enjoy here. It's not really about "winning" or "getting a high score." From a gaming standpoint, it's a paradox that being humiliated, dominated, or helpless is a "win." - LOL

The mystery of how we get there is the crux. I think that's one of the main reasons why the first chapter of your story is so enticing.

Love your creativity! (From one to another)


The "live action movie" description of how you compose your writing is interesting. I'm guessing that you are very "visual". I'm "kinesthetic", so I tend to "live" (in my mind) the experience... kind of like a method actor, when I write. It can be exhausting.

I think I would enjoy collaborating on a project with you sometime, but please don't feel pressured by that. Getting two creative people focused in the same direction at the same time is like trying to herd cats. (or pussies - hehe)

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Sarah
 
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SissyBabyPet
@ Sarah Marina

  Any creative input into anything can be exausting. Yes I have a very visual mind, but I still have to work hard to make sure that I use the right words to describe the action and the people that I see in my mind. Yes I know I have said the stories do wright themselves, and they do. That said, it's not entirely efforttless, though it does not require as much effort as your way of doing a story.  I can't promise you anything, but I have been wanting to do a story in the style of like a Drama, focusing on the main characters discovery of being a Sissy Adult Baby, how that effects him, his family, who are not accpeting of it or suportive. The character leaves home and becomes a travelling hitch hiker, not going anywhere specific and hoping to meet someone that can accept him and support him and give him the life that he needs.

This particually type of story seems to elude me every time I try to write it. I would gladly welcome a collaberation on this story, if my imagination will eventually work for me on that one. I know I can't force the matter, so I wait for when my imagination to work it's magic on that particular story. So far it hasn't done so. But there is no way of telling if it ever will or won't. I have done a lot of writing over the years and I havre done so many different themes, apart from Horror. I won't do stories of that nature.

The only other story project that I once started, but never finished a few months back that would require mroe than one writer for that, is something that needs genuine commitment to the project. At least some knowledge base of the subject, or at least a genuine interest to want ot take part of it. It's a non sissy related project and if I can, but not sure as yet how, to gain the interest, for a specific fandom, so, there is that aspect to consdider. Idealy I would like for someone to do vocal work for the project as it is intended to be an audio series.

I will be head of the project and make sure each story follow through with no inconsitancies etc. Depending on my imagination, I will write a few episodes myself. Meaning this audio series is like an audio version of a tv series. There will be a format to follow, but other than that, no one needs to worry about spelling or grammer. So long as the one doing the reading can read the stories, is the most important. I could use a computer voice, but I feel that, that would not be ideal for the aduio series. At least for me on a personal level.

I want it to do well and for all as well as the fans in question to like and love the series and want more of it. The platfrom for the Audio series will be YouTube. I have a YouTube Channel, so I will post all of the audios there. So the person who does the audio work needs to send to me the recording work, so that I can post each episode and not fall behind on sending me those recording works. Which may be difficult for that person and I would not want to put anyone under any kind of presure. The only thing to bear in mind is the fact that the audio series is mostly for the fan base but for everyone else too.

Long story short, I honestly do not know if the audio series will be well recieved and that will create disapointment for all involved in the project. I definitely do not want to get anyones hopes up. How well the series will do will be entirely on the audiences listening to each episode, the more they like it, they will want to have more. The series could last 5 seasons, or more, like a TV series. Or less, if less, the audio series will not be worth persuing further. With all and everything said, I feel that the audio project would be best left not being produced. Doing anything that is fan based is exceptionally difficult to do.

Feel free to send me a PM. with ideas, or just to have somone to talk to. I am a good listener. I 'll happly be a sounding board if you have ideas for your own stories and not sure how to do them etc. You can bounce ideas off, of me. If I can help you in anyway, please do not hesitate to send me a PM.

 
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babygirlpansy
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  Dear sissybabypet, this sissy knows exactly what you are talking about when it writes a story. this sissy as has created the entire exoplanet world of "Zenzar', along with Maps, History, and Character Lineage. this sissy always starts out with a basic outline  the details get filled in and the story  progresses from there, this sissy also tries to come up with similarities to Earth culture, as this sissy truly does believe in Aliens and a Universal seeding by beings a long, long, time ago.

pansy Gronski
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SissyBabyPet
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  Wow! What a nice and different comment. Thank you so, so very much babygirlpansy. I am simply blown away by your comment. Can we be friends please? I would like to know about your creativity and your beliefs. I am very open minded, there are things that I believe in that I know most others would not and that is okay. My axium on that is: Each to their own beliefs. One should never laugh at or ridicule others for believing in different things. The exoplanet "Zenzar" and how you wright, all sound wonderfully amazing. I very rarely do a story where things like lineage, the mthology of a world, the folklore etc. Unless my imagination includes all of that stuff, except for maps. I can't do those. But I certainly at least can describe each world that I see in my mind and that is more than enough for me. You must be a very talented person indeed to be able to inlcude maps with your stories.

  
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Sissybeckyfunstuff
Interesting story. Can't wait to read what happens. :)  
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SissyBabyPet
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  Thank you Sissybeckyfunstuff for your comment, it is very much appreciated and it is so nice to see a new person making a comment on one of my posts.  Be sure to subscribe to this post, so that way you won't miss a new chapter, when I post one. I will post chapter three tomorrow.

 
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Baby Butch
Interesting update finding out what that mysterious train is all about. It is a surprise to find out the train is an alien transporting
people to another world.

I think I would be scared at this point. Will they ever see home again? I like the train image you included. : )
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SissyBabyPet
@ Baby Butch

  Thank you Baby Butch for the comment, much appreciated. I like the idea of the train being a mysterious alien entity that transports people to other worlds. I could be wrong, but I do not think that anyone has come up with this kind of idea in any fantasy or science fiction book, movie, series. That I know or am aware of. It was blue in colour, the train I mean in my mind and it looked to be like an orindanary train.

I knew that I had to have an image of a train. Not only that, but one on a lone rail track going across a field and I got real lucky with the image that I used for the story cover. That train comes as near close as to the one that I saw in my mind. So I decided to have that picture of the train to be my visual referrence for it, which you will eventually see in the story, as it progresses.I am glad that you like the image, I'ts so perfect for the story cover, it looks and seems so ordinary that you would not suspect it to be ominous or even an alien entity.

 
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sissybabysamantha2
I  am liking this story more and more very mysterious love the Si Fi element. I love the idea of the boys being sissified. Cant  wait for the next chapters         
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SissyBabyPet
@ sissybabysamantha2

  Thank you sisybabysamantha, I am so happy to hear that you are liking the story more and more. I like and love Science Fiction it shares first place with my love of Fantasy too. I will be posting chapter 4 tomorrow, I would have posted it yesterday, but I had to hand my computer in to have that special game put on it that I talked about. Tehy guy who fixed the on/off button was paid to put game on as I am not used to PC Games and they are not so straight foward to set up. He got so busy, that he had to leave for the next day, which is today, I just got back a few moments ago and I am so wanting to take a look at the game etc.

I hope you can wait until tomrrow? Sorry for the delay, it was completely unexpected. If you want to know what the game is. I have made a post about it. Title: The Game That I have Long Been Waiting For. It explains why I got it and why I wanted it so much. And today I just got in the post another game that I found, but that one is for the xbox 360 and it looks to be similar to Sacred 2. Game Title: Kingdom Under Fire: Circle Of Doom. I am so looking forward to playing this game too. So today, I am going to be having a very busy day of gaming.
 
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Baby Butch
Wow this story is getting even better! The new world is Taran and they got here by a being called Carrion. The Taran's are reptile like people, this is certainly a surprise. John and Roy are held prisoners unless they agree to dress and act like girls and become Sissies. I like the Role Reversal chapter.
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SissyBabyPet
@ Baby Butch

  Thank you Baby Butch for the compliment. It's always appreciated. I am glad that you like the story and the chapter itself. I like the idea and imagination of there being reptile humanoid like beings in the story, while it's not an entirely new idea. You see so very few of these in most modern day science fiction shows. I do not know if you know this or watched it. But V the Series and it has been a movie too, featured Reptilian humanoid like beings very heavily in that. I like the Carrion too, such an unsual entity, I think it shows in my imagination that I have watched so many different Science Fitcion Movies and TV Shows over the years.

 
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sissybabysamantha2
Oh it is very interesting are they about to be transported back to there normal lives dressed and acting as sissies how humiliating that would be. or is there something else in store for them. It is going to be fun. I  would like to see them regressed to sissy babies But it does not matter that mutch the story is great       
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SissyBabyPet
@ sissybabysamantha2

  Thank you sissybabysamantha2 for the comment. I am so happy that you like the story, I can't reveal anything, as that would spoil the story. All I can and will say is that there is planety of surprises in store for the characters of this story, it is an adventure not to be missed. I will post a new chapter later on today, or possibly tomorrow.

 
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Baby Butch

John and Roy have to live as sissies according to the law. What is interesting is that Roy is a sissy and never said anything. I see now there is a message in your story about being tolerant of what others do. John accepts what Roy is and both will be sissies.

King Leon laid down the law and it appears the girls have become guys Dan and Tom. I like how the story has become a sissy story. The outfits with dresses sound cute for John as Sissy Jennifer and Roy as Sissy Jessica. The panty check was cute though embarrassing.

The runaway sissy led to this mysterious fog surrounding those looking for her. I am wondering what is next. Great story and would like to read more! Nice to be reading another one of your stories SissyBabyPet. They have always been good.

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@ Baby Butch

  Thank you for the comment Baby Butch. I am gald that you liked chapter 4. It was a nice good twist having the boys become sissies and the girls become tomboys. I am not too sure if anyone has done that in a story before. It is okay if so, though I would think such an occurance to be rare at best. It was nice to be able to write the subject about cultural differences and customs. After all, a lot of different countries out there do have what some may percieve as odd or strange customs or laws. Equally they have to be respected as they in turn would respect ours too.

Even some fantasy or science fiction stories can be quite educational and that was what my imagination was aiming for. And a good sci fi would not be a good sci fi without aliens of different kinds in it and how the humans react to that etc. Most other sci fi movies or TV Series and stories, already have humans and aliens co existing together, and that is okay, but it is nice to have story, where that is not the case and all about trying to get along together etc. For me personally, this makes for a more gripping and exciting type of sci fi tale. I'm glad that you liked the outfits of both Sissy Jennifer and Sissy Jessica. The panty check was a wonderful idea. I couldn't simply resist it. *Giggles*

 
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UPDATE!

Here's letting everyone know that this story has been updated with Chapter 5. Please leave comments, so that I go on to post post chapter 6. Thank you.
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sissybabysamantha2
This getting better and better. They are now sissy slaves. I wonder what happens next      
 
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@ sissybabysamantha2

  Thank you so much for the comment sissybabysamantha2 and this next part is for everyone. I'm so, so deeply sorry for the lateness of my replies and my posts. Unfortunately for the past few days, I have had no internet connection until today, the people at Virgin Media were able to at long last were able to fix a major issue that they had been havign with their broadband services. I switched my computer this morning to find to my much relief, that my internet service was back up and operational.

I am glad that you like the story so far sissybabysamantha2, this story is for me personally one of my all time best ones. On the whole all of my stories are good, the very first few ones were weak, but generally good. I would say that somewhere between the 90's right up to the very present date is where my stories really began to go a long way and be the best that I have ever been able to do. But anyone who likes to write and do stories can reach the same level, so long as they have not only great imagination, but passion for doing what they do, it takes many, many years for any would be writer to be able to achieve really, really good pieces of work. I know this from personal experience, with the many, many years in which I have done stories, from pen to paper, to computer.
 
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Baby Butch
Wow, interesting update, I never could have guessed this. All 4 captured and made slaves. The tomboys have a master and the sissies have a mistress. Funny how she was a shark and now a mermaid. She appears to be good but I will wait and see!
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@ Baby Butch

 Thank you Baby Butch for the comment, the past few days for me have virtualy been a knightmare. (Read my reply to sissybabysamantha2) Having no internet access for so long was really upsetting for me, being able to go online coem to Sissykiss etc. has become a very integeral part of my life, which I could not imagine my life without such things. Anyway, I'm so glad to be back online again. I am glad that you like chapter 5. Shark people was a nice touch and quite a contrast to that of the reptile people and very few science fiction movies, TV series feature Shark like beings, this I know without a doubt. So I am very happy that I was able to come up with such beings for this story, also having a Masters and Mistresses theme going on was just as eqaully a cool idea too.

 
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@ SissyBabyPet
 Yes the master / mistress theme is a good addition to your story. Sorry to hear about the distressing computer problems. I have had bad experiences with my Internet Provider on occasions. It is great when they fix it but not fun when it goes bad. Shark beings is a new one for me. I have been real busy and will get to your conclusion when I can enjoy it without being tired.
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@ Baby Butch

  Thank you Baby Butch, I am so happy to hear that you like the Shark beings idea. I do not know if it is an entirely new idea. But it is a good chance that no one has used that in any Sci-Book, TV Series and Movies. There's so many though science fiction novels, that there is every chance, no matter how slight, that, the idea for Shark beings may have been used. I can only hope though that my idea is a true genuine an Original Idea. That would be fantastic if that was so.

Take your time Baby Butch, I have been too tired too, due to too many hot days where I live here in the UK. It's funny and strange of how things have changed so very much. I grew up in the times of when there was no such thing as a personal computer and throughout all the years of my life, did I never think that I would ever really need one, when home computers became a common thing and became better, as time went by, I never needed a computer. Now I cannot imagine my life in these modern day times without a computer.
 
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SissyBabyPet
 UPDATE!

Chapter 6 has been added. Bonus Content: (Behind The Story) Has Also Been Added.
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sissybabysamantha2
Avery good and interesting story. I like the way it ended you could add more to it any time if you wanted        
 
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@ sissybabysamantha2

  sissybabysamantha2, I am so happy that you like the story and how it ended. As of yet, my imagination has not come up with anything further for this story. Which is a little sad. I do feel that there could be more for this story. All I can do is wait for, if ever the right time for my imagination to come back to this story and extend it. I never force a story sequel or a story prequel. If there is either of these to a story, it's because my imagination has been able to provide me with those.

True imagination always runs it's own course, we can sometimes add to it, alter it a little, or take something away if it should not really fit the story. Beyond all of these things however, creativity is a force and a nature of it's own making and a most wonderful gift to have too.
 
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Baby Butch
Great story and it ends with a mystery. Will the 4 Earthlings make it back home? Good idea getting away from the Shark-Conians! I guess only the Carrion knows. Very good story SissyBabyPet.

 Berry good story!
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@ Baby Butch

  Thank you so much Baby Butch for the comment. It is so very much appreciated. I am glad that you liked the ending. At least it leaves the story open. If my imagination should want to take it any further. With so many different contrasting themes put into it. I think it would be quite hard for my imagination to come up with equally more interesting and very contrasting differences, from alien species, to other cultural differences etc.

Your Berry Joke made me smile and giggle. Thank you for that Baby Butch.
   
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Baby Butch
Re: Bonus Feature: No I was not disappointed and thanks for sharing your story. You are good with the science fiction and mystery themes. I have not tried that yet but may some day. *hugs*
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@ Baby Butch

  Thank you Baby Butch. You're actually the first person like ever to comment on my Bonus Posts. I know that not every story that I have done has a behind look into how they were made. What my inspirations were, etc. Maybe it's just me, but my mind began to wonder why no one asks how J. R. R. Tolkien wrote his stories, what was his inspirations behind the story, the characters, etc. (For Exmaple) I guess the more my mind pondered on such things, that I finally got into the habbit, where possible, to provide such insights behind my stories.

I could be wrong, but I think that you could be the only one to really appreciate the behind scenes kind of thing that I provide for my stories. Not everyone seems to apperciate the behind the scenes take on my stories. It matters not, though that said, I have near pretty much stopped doing the behind the scenes stuff, unless the story ideas to be so good etc. It would feel a great shame not to do a behind the scenes thing for those particular stories, but that's just me personally. I'm glad to hear that you wasn't disapointed.
 
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sissydina218
lovely story seemed to get going too fast towards the end, personally wished to have heard about a lot more worlds. But definitely enjoyed it anyways. 
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@ sissydina218

  Thank you sissydina, I'm glad that you liked the story, unfortunately, I was running out of imagination for this story towards the end. There was the intitial idea to make this story into something like a seriel. But sadly, my imagination simply flat out, which happens sometimes. I'm not happy when it does that. At some point I will go through all of my stories and see if it is possible for me and my imagination to make things better etc.
  
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