Baby Michelle goes to the beach! (R?)
my first story. idk really what to right about really just trying something new.
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well this is my first story and i really dont know what to right about, this story really started out as a dream and a fantasy, so i hope it doesnt get to wierd. i just thought i would share. i dont thnk its any good. i still havent finished the store either, i'm very sorry.







I wake up after a good nights sleep and mommy is already awake downstairs. as i roll over, sucking on my binky, i hear her start to come up the stairs. as she enters the room i turn towards her and smile. well about time you got up little girl. she says. did my little baby sleep well, she asks. as i nod she smells my fouled diaper. oh goodness girl you are a stinky one. well alright lay on your back so i can change you, she says. i turn over onto my back and mommy pulls my legs out straight and undoes the straps to my diaper and opens it up. oh wow baby girl what did you eat last night, she says staring at my rather full diaper. she sets the new diaper to the side and takes the baby wipes and starts wiping my bottom and genitals clean. once she gets the outside of my bottom cleaned she takes a new baby wipe and wraps it around her finger. mommy notices my puzzled look and says its to clean out the inner part of my tushy. she then incerts her baby wipe wraped finger all the way in my bottom and moves it around and around. she does this several times until the wipe comes back out clean. there, she says all clean. dont you feel better baby girl, she asks. i nod as she straps the new diaper on me, when she finishes i sit up and give her a big hug, then i take my binky out of my mouth and quickly give her a kiss on the cheek. i then quickly put my binky back in my mouth. mommy laughs.
Guess what baby girl she says. i look at her confused. today is a special day for us, we are going to go out and have fun today, she says. i smile a big grin and give her another big hug. today i though we could go to the beach, what do you think about that michelle? she asks. my eyes grow large and i squeel and jump up and give her another big hug. she laughs and gives me a hug back. ok now, go ahead and get your swim suit out while i go get mine, she says. mommy walks out of my room and goes to her room. i jump out of my pink and purple bed and run to my dresser and pull out my little onesy swim suit mommy got me for my last birthday. it is purple with little fake gems all over the chest. are you almost ready baby girl? mommy calls down the hall. yes mommy! i almost yell back. mommy laughs silently again in her room, pleased at how excited her daughter is. mommy comes back down the hallway in her swim suit with a short skirt and a tank top on over her suit. ok little girl lets go, she says. i squeel again and run ahead of her down the stairs, screaming the whole way, ignoring mommy telling me to be carefull going down the stairs. she laughs behind me and heads down the stairs after me.

and thats what i got so far. again i am very sorry its so short. please forgive me.
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baby_anna
Don't be sorry, it's a good start. I love how youve started this story and im looking forward to more

 
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Fairybelle
You don't have to apologize so much Michelle. We here at Sissykiss just want you to be yourself and take things at your own pace.

This is a lovely little story and I quite enjoyed reading it. Things like Quotation marks and better Paragraph separation will make your future writings easier to follow. I felt like I was rushed without them.

I enjoyed your depiction of a Mother and daughter's love. 

Is this the end? I'd love to see more of your style. 
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Mina Silverwind
I see nothing wrong with the story as is, you take your time, and make it a memorable one for all time, kudos.
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michellebaby
no there's more i just havent been able to get on sk or think of anything else right now. my life is a real mess right now. i'm so sorry.
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Mina Silverwind
I hope you find a balance in all facets of your life, and come back to sk when you are feeling better.
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