All PG 13 The Island Of Souls (Full Complete Story+Bonus)
A Young Boy Takes An Amazing Adventure, Beyond His Wildest Imagination.
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PetBabyAmy

 

C 1998

 

 

 

PROLOGUE

 

A 15 year old boy stood inside an empty bedroom, that had space themed wallpaper all over the walls with several patch marks where posters of his favourite football team had been, but mostly his favourite Heavy Metal rock band, used to be displayed. The boy seemed to be stood there as though staring out into space or something, when a womans voice suddenly called out. Darren, get a move on will you, we dont want to be late, and we have a long journey ahead of us.

 

The boy was snapped out of whatever daydream that he was having. He was not happy; the big sulk on his face was evident of that fact. He had dark brown hair and blue eyes. His mother was the same, she was 35 years old, his father was one year older, with the same colour of hair, but had hazel brown eyes instead. The mother was of slim build with short brown hair, but that was the way that she preferred it that way. His Dad also had short hair.

 

Darren himself, had long hair that came half way down his back, being a fan of Heavy Metal, his parents did not seem to mind or care that much that he had long hair. Though his mother half wished she had a little girl instead. Darrens father was of plump build, due to a lot of beer drinking, though he was not overly a heavy drinker, his portly frame most came from eating way too many cheese burgers. Darren was of average height and build for his age.

 

Im coming mum. Shouted Darren, as he turned, ran out of the bedroom and down the stairs. His father had seen him, even heard him run like an idiot and shook his head by the time Darren reached the bottom of the stairs. What have I told you about running down those stairs?

Sorry dad, I was in a rush.

That is no excuse, you could have easily broken your neck, and then we would be late, all because of you being careless.

 

He said that he was sorry Tom. Cant you leave it at that? Remarked Sarah, who was not too happy with either Toms reaction or with Darren, for being so foolish. Tom sighed. Okay, just get in the car Darren and let us not waste any more time. Darren did not reply, he simply got into the back of the car, sat on the back seat, with his hand held electronic game of Space Invaders in his hand. He switched it on and began playing the first level. Both of his parents gave a heavy sigh, half wishing they had never gotten him that game in the first place.

 

Times were hard, both Sarah and Tom stood to lose their jobs and their home. By chance, since Tom liked watching the news and it was of some interest to Sarah too. A story had been featured on the news that Jobs were going in China that were looking for workers that are willing to work in China. Both Tom and Sarah looked into the matter, they got lucky and found a place where they could both work together in the same place, their work place even provided them with a list of affordable properties that were available in China, they found one which was close by near to the work place that they would be working at.

 

Tom and Sarah could not have hoped for a more prefect place. But moving to China meant, leaving all they knew and loved, far behind them. Tom and Sarah did not have many friends and both of them had no relatives on either side. Whereas Darren had made friends, he had lots of them, he had gone to the best school that he could have ever asked for. Hence why he was not so very happy when they had told him that they would be moving from the UK, To China.

 

Darren did not want to go, but he had no other place he could go and stay at. The removal company that Tom had chosen, had arrived very early to pick up and collect all of the furniture and everything. The company did International removals, and Tom was able to get a good discount with the company, saving him a shear fortune and a fraction of the cost of what it would have cost him, if he had gone to another company for the same services.

 

They took a Ferry with having a car, they felt travelling by sea to be safer than going by a special aeroplane that carries cars as well as passengers. They booked a Ferry that was not a family cruise one, with no side stop tours etc. Tom managed to find a Ferry Service that was for taking passengers and cars only, one direct destination, no stops. The Ferry carried enough supplies etc., to make the one trip there and back. It was not long before the Ferry finally arrived at China.

 

Darren was glad of getting back onto dry land, travelling by sea definitely did not agree with him so very well and he had been sick a few times during the journey. Tom and Sarah will be glad when they finally reach their new home. They needed to arrive ahead of the Removal Company, as they had only been sent the one set of keys and Tom had not had a chance to get any spare sets cut. With the keys being slightly different, it was likely that he was not going to be able to get copies made from a British Key Cutter Firm.

 

So having copies of the keys had to wait until he got to China and found a Chinese Key Cutter Firm instead. The New Home was in a far out place long away from the main city of China itself, but to get there, meant having to drive through the main city itself, then getting onto the Highway, until they can get access to open country roads to get to the location of their new home. Which seemed quite exciting to both Tom and Sarah, but not to Darren, who really looked miserable, as they began to make their way through the city of China.

 

It was slow going with traffic, backed up by miles. How long is this going to take? It seems to be taking ages for us to get onto the Highway. Complained Darren, who was despite getting very far with his game, he was slowly however, starting to get bored. Hey... it will take as long as it takes, now quit your whining... You are starting to sound like a baby. Remarked Tom in annoyance with his son. Sarah was annoyed too.

 

Darren decided to be quiet for a while and get back to his game. In fact, he was doing very well. He was on one of the more difficult levels in the Space Invaders game and getting the best high score ever. Tom had finally had managed to get off the city streets and onto the Highway, but still, even travelling down that seemed like to Darren was still taking way too long and he was beginning to wonder if this new home was somewhere in the middle of nowhere. Little did he know, or his parents for that matter, that they were destined to take a journey beyond their imagination....

 

 

 

 

 

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Baby Butch
I see the story is finished. I am reading the latest updates. I like the faceless spirit and wolf like creature with 2 legs.

I will read on later, the story is mysterious at this point. Glad Six got out of the Sissybaby work house before getting sick and dying.

I really like the image of the train on water!


I have read more and find there is many sudden twists and plot changes. I hope Darren's parents are not really dead. Suddenly he is back with the lost souls again.

I am up to the soul bomb part and stopped reading for now.

Thanks, the story reposted nicely and I will finish it later!


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baby5522
Forgot to mention that the train on the water image is from the movie Spirited Away, the scene that shws it is amazing and it looks almost as though it is on water, until you notice the track it is on through where the water is clear enough to see it.

To think it can somehow still run, with the wheels being underwater, that would I feel in the real world, effect a real train, since this particular train is part of the Spirit World, there is nothing to say that the laws of physics of the living world apply or are the same to the world of the dead.

It an many othre scenes in Spirited Away are so uterly sureal, it takes the viewer by surprise with wonder how such odd things to exist in the world of spirits. The lamp post with a gloved hand that functions however as a foot, bouncing up and down as it moves alone, guiding Sen along, really boggles the mind.

The train scnene by far though is the most not only surreal moment, it is the most visually stunning rendered scene of the entire movie. I knew that I had to keep that for my story, it would not have felt right not to have included the train on the water scene.

Instead of being guided by an odd looking lampost, I had my version of No Face being the one to guide Six, also I wanted my version of No Face to be a lot more mysterious than the Orginal No Face of the Spirited Away Movie.

I liked the plot twists too, it took not only imagination, but a lot of hard crafing work to write those plot twists, too keep the scenes different, yet at the same time still have the feel of Spirited Away itself, but without beign a copied/altered scene for scene version of it.

It was very hard to keep things original, but also to keep it faithfull to the movie as well. 

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Baby Butch
I found where I left off and finished the story. The last part was amazing and I enjoyed all the changes and mysterious people and beings. It was sad for a time, but had a remarkably happy ending.

Great story! 
 
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baby5522
Fank you so very much Baby Butch for your comments, I appreciate both vrey much, I spent a lot of time yesterday posting each and every chapter on each and every seperate page, editing them all one at a time, while the copy and paste works wonders, spacing is the only minor problem, where a paragraph and the start of another have a huge gap inbetween them, but that is easily fixed.

I hope others will comment, since I put so much effort and took the time to post the whole completed story together with the bonus special. Only time will tell. I am glad that you like the ending, it was sad for me too and I am the one that has made the story, but I knew how it was going to end, the scene with No Face scarificing his life, for Six/Darren came quickly, it was quite a challange to work out how I was going to get to that pont, as all I had at one point, was just that scene and nothing else. 

So I left the story for a while, not wanting to rush my ideas, came back to it later and found my self with frech new ideas that help me to make it to that scene and to the very end. Sadness can work well in stories, or movies, or more to the point, that they can move people in that way or have that affect on people. But then the movie or story has to have a really good happy ending, or the audience/reader may feel disappointed to find that there isn't one.

Very few of my stories end up with bonus features that go into the back ground of the making of that story. Only a rare few of my stories get them and have them, where I feel that they need one. A special Feature that is. I will be posting my story for you soon.

Love, hugs & kisses

I LOVE BEING A SISSY BABY PET


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sarahpenguin
Enjoyed this story.  Are your doctor who stories posted someplace?  :)
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baby5522
Fank you Sarahpenguin for your comement, much appreciated. I am glad that you like the story. Sorry to say that my Doctor Who stories are not posted anywhere. I keep them on my computer. I tried a few fan based stories on here once, Star Trek and Quantum Leap, they got very little comments, which sad to say that got me too uspet , so I removed them, after that, I vowed not to post any Fan based related type of story here at sk, ever again.

I do not know if I will post my Doctor Who stories anywhere else, it is important to me for my work to be properly and fully appreciated, it would be difficult to find a site where my Doctor Who stories would be, Die hard Doctor Who fans would probably not like them, because of the Sissy themes involved. 

Even though I feel my Doctor Who work to be good and a straight guy and firend of mine called Patrick, who likes Doctor Who too, agrees with me, that my Doctor Who stories are my most best work ever out of all of my other stories, and sees no problem with the Sissy themes either, hes a one in a million open minded nice guy I am lucky and honoured to have as my friend. 

He's even said that my work is good enough to even be used as Televised Adventures, and that is quite a compliment. That said, not many Doctor Who fans may agree, all because of the Sissy themes involved, if they cannot allow themselves to see past that, then they will not see the really good work that I have done.

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'Ask not what you can do for a Sissy. Ask a Sissy what they can do for you.'


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sarahpenguin
@ PetBabyAmy
 Sorry to hear your other stuff here did not get much comment, it'd drive me kind of nuts if I posted something and nobody posted - not that I write/wrote stuff good enough to share and haven't really since I graduated high school.  If you would feel safe sharing your DW fanfic stories with me via PM, I'd like very much to take a peek, I've enjoyed your stories online, I've been in love with Doctor Who since I watched the first episode of Tom Baker's on PBS when I was 6 or so.  *points to my hello kitty pacifier I've been nursing most of the day - right now in fact* so I'm open to various stuff.  If you don't want to send it to a random crazy person, that's okay too.

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@ sarahpenguin
  Sarahpenguin, fank you for the comment, since you a real interest in my Doctor Who work I will send you a PM with my email address for you, email me so that I can send you my Doctor Who stories as attached Word Docs, if that is okay? That way for me is best and easier, just in case you're wondering.

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